While I would have liked seeing some more of her struggles before she was this silly and wise, involving Kelemvor on a personal level does help resolve some of the strange plot/theology elements in MOTB. Nice.

Very intruiding story and strange pairing. I was into the whole story that I thought at one moment I was reading a book. A very good book.

If you make more fanfictions (your other two aren't bad) I wish you Kusmet!

Another very intriguing pairing!

The whole piece has this beautifully dreamy feel to it, especially as Nissan is walking around the city. I particularly enjoyed your use of books to explain her past and how she came to love Kelemvor - reminded me of the library (I think) at the end of MOTB in the City of Judgment.

It's certainly a very different destiny for a character, but I think it dovetailed very nicely at the end, and I loved how they spent so much time simply talking, getting to know each other outside of dreams.

And I have to say, I absolutely adore the title - perfect :)

Good story, I like it. :)

I enjoyed this because I never read a romance about Kelemor. She is a little ditsy the character, sweet and somewhat sterotpical typical but her thoughts and her perceptive were a joy to read about because she was so shy and complicated. I don't really have your same view of the Death God, but you make him sound so hot. Although in the game he already had a sexy sounding voice. And then hinting at Sand's affections for him was very awesome, I always love stories about him, maybe you could write one PC/Sand story? That would be awesome because I love your writing style, the thoughts, the feelings, and other emotions that you write. It's all very good.

The was incredible and interesting, though chapters organize everything a bit, and cut up length... This is still good besides that.