Moorree!

I like the way you've set up this story as short mixes of flashbacks instead of how you'd normally get one big long flashback that makes you forget what happened at the start of the story, I loved Hibari's possessiveness. Keep up the great work :)

please slap me for being a pervert. but this fic is just way too good... please keep making ? x Haru (i like Haru so muuuch).. Thanks a bunch XD

OMG OMG OMG! one of the best ff that i have ever read *q*

i hope there's a sequel to this...

like a marriage or a baby

It's great fanfic :D

OMG I DIED.

The way you're able to switch between the present and past scenes was very well-done. Good job!

The way the Ambrosia quotegoes with the story is amazing! Brilliant! Great job!

Ok, so I'm a sceptic when it comes to M-rated fics, but this was nice. I love the way Hibari stakes his claim whether or not she agrees. Good job in keeping with the character :)

*wipes the big amount of blood from thy nose away*

W-Well. That was... That was interesting.

i knew hibari was hot...but when i read this i imagine Hibari was way hotter! nice story! keep up the good work! _

oh shoot. oh shoot. This was... so darn good! I like your writing style, the present then slowly showing what happened through flashbacks... great job, great job, 1886 ftw! \m/

oh my god.

i never really liked reading AU fics, since they kind of ruin the feel and plot of the original story, but...

this one was just...

i loved it. i really like the name of the title too, and the plot, oh my god, the plot. i just, i can't even.

this was so amazingly written that i am starting to say random, weird things. askdalsksjlasksal anyways, this is just beautiful D

okay i am with my awkward review now /shot

WOOHOO! Nice baby! OHMYGOSH! xD