Good story so far! I'm hoping with the right guidance from Moody, Severus will will be able to stay clear of the wannabee Death Eaters in Slytherin. I'm sure Petunia must be curious about the changes in Severus. I can imagine her expression when Moody turns up to pick up Severus although I doubt she'll mutter anything about freaks around him.
BTW, I think you meant that Moody chased a rogue wizard rather than a rouge wizard although I did get a chuckle out of picturing Moody chasing this heavily rouged wizard into town.
Looking forward to the next chapter! Please update soon!

wow, i mean great story. Love the originality and the whole plot! please update b/c you have me yearning to read more!

sooooo amazingly good! Please update, this is one of the two only good, non-abandoned, Severus-is-an-orphan story on this site. So please hurry!

A good chapter. Yes, one of the few disadvantages of his new living environment would be the lack of opportunities it offered to meet Lily.

Good chapter... but I truly hope you are not planning to turn a socially awkward intellectual with an abrasive, if witty, personality, into an athlete. Besides truning him into a mary-sueish character, it would completely ruin his appeal.

I enjoyed this chapter, especially the memory of Severus had of he and his father throwing a ball around. It's nice to think that at one point he was loved by his parents. I hope Moody can build his confidence up. It would be quite the surprise if Severus was to return to Hogwarts and get on the Quidditch team and make a respectable showing, not to mention with all that running and some decent food he should look better too. Will he and Lily get the chance to spend some time together over the summer?

HAHAHAHAHHAHAHA! Never have I read a Sev/Lily story has anyone ever thought of putting Sev in the care of Alastor Moody, it's bloody brilliant!

The story is very entertaining and I look forward to more chapters...the thought of what would become of the Slytherin Sev under Alastor Moody's care is mind-boggling, please keep him under him. What an interesting storyline you've come upon.

Update soon please!

A good choice. Moody wouldn't coddle and pity him like, say, Lily's parents would... and at the same time, they are both down to earth, no nonsense individuals with rather abrasive personalities...

I'd almost forgotten about this story so it's nice to see a new chapter. Moody is Severus' guardian? Is this a temporary thing or just until Dumbledore can find something more permanent?

I just wanted to tell you that you might want to change the character from Lily Luna P. to Lily Evans P. :)

Love this one! You are right! There are far to little good storys whith S/L pairing out there. Please dont let this one down!

Well, seeing as you asked for a review if I thought you deserved it I'll just type something, even though I don't have much to say.

Your story starts off fine, it's interesting, especially because most stories about these two start with them a few years older. It'll be interesting to read and to see where you are going with it.

I'll be adding this to my 'to be followed' list and I realy hope you'll update soon!

Lily seems to understand Severus so well. I hope they can keep that closeness. I'm curious, was the storm a manifistation of Severus' grief or just a coincidence?

That was so well done! I hope to see much more of Sev and Lil in the future! It was such a sweet moment. Well done :)

Looking forward to the next chapter :D

Missteque.

You better not stop now. LOL. I liked this chappie. Gotta love fluff.