| Reviews for Insomnia |
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   LadyChisana chapter 1 . 10/4/2014 I like that they stay in their characters, Akiyama sounds like himself and Nao sounds very innocent. Keep writing :D |
| sayume214 chapter 1 . 2/11/2013 Sweet! |
| radialarch chapter 1 . 12/19/2011 Love that Akiyama can calmly explain the nightmares as a consequence of stress, but he has them too. Really like your writing style :) Present tense win |
| THIS-IS-NO-LONGER-AN-ACCOUNT chapter 1 . 5/18/2010 Waah this was wonderful! Please write more stories like these~ Ah. I'm yet to check your profile, silly me... *cough* Nice work anyways! :D I'm not sure if you wanted any constructive critique, but I don't really have any to give :) It was very well written. Akiyamas dream moved me especially for some reason. It was so like him in a way. The demands he puts on himself are so great. It was twisted/harsh/painful/psychologically deep and described his life (and him) in a way. |
| PhantomRoxas729 chapter 1 . 11/15/2009 Alrght, I've read your stories, and while they're generally good, there's just one problem. You often write things in the present tense and not the past tense. |
| Sundae Bunny chapter 1 . 10/18/2009 Cute! AkiyamaXNao forever! I like how he dreams of her falling off a building and she dreams of falling off a building while he watches. Makes them seem connected in some odd way!:P |
| JKWhite chapter 1 . 9/19/2009 Wow, I really liked this. Akiyama's nightmare, especially, seemed really realistic (in a dream way) and exactly perfect for him. |
| Death101- Fox Version chapter 1 . 5/1/2009 Nicely done! I loved this one. The dreams were awesome! -D101 |
| x.Riku-chan chapter 1 . 4/18/2009 I wish you would write long stories instead of one-shots...one-shots aren't enough! /enough of my selfishness That was so lovely and cute...T.T |
| enticement chapter 1 . 4/6/2009 Personally, Love it. How IC of the characters to act the way they did. And their line of thoughts seem the same. And I saw the paring even without squinting but maybe because I'm a shipper. |
| Angste chapter 1 . 4/3/2009 The part where Nao falls asleep on the phone mad me laugh because I do that too. This is a nice story. |
| AX2 chapter 1 . 4/3/2009 Even without squinting, I can already see the Akiyama/Nao. Though, that might just be because I'm a shipper of the particular pairing, eheh. Great fanfic, I particularly like how their dreams seem to be tied together, and so are their trail of thoughts to caffeine (albeit in different forms). Despite his own nightmares, Akiyama was able to calm Nao down with some psychological explanations coolly. How IC of him. xD |
