This is great! I like it. Made me laugh some, but it also made me all the more fond of the pairing than I already am. I love them both, they're just awesome that way.

I think the ending was fine though, cus they're just like that: not the lovey-dovey type.

And I also feel that you've captured their personalities and characters well.

Finally, thank you for this great story. It made my morning.

Ciao and keep up the good work!

Hey there. If this is your first fic then I gotta say you did well so far. I enjoy your writing, its witty and entertaining at the same time. This chapter made me laugh some too, so I'm really enjoying this. Keep up the good work! I'm off to finish the rest of the chapters!

Awesome!

could you make a ichigo x hiyori story next

can you make a Ichigo x Hiyori story

I can't wait for more!

On another note, I don't want Hiyori to die, damn it! I wouldn't stop reading Bleach, but it wouldn't be the same. She is probably my favourite female manga/anime character ever. I've never liked Hinamori, but if Hiyori dies I am going to cry. Simple as that.

...

And then probably curse Tite Kubo for a while.

Sorry, you probably don't care, but I just needed to rant a little to someone that actually likes Hiyori. '

Aw, I really like this fic! It's nice to see someone writing for this pair. Great work!

Don't worry, it was amazing and fantastic. I absolutely loved every one of them. There isn't enough of this pairing to go around anyway! XD And I totally agree- I have no idea what I'd do if any of the Vizards died! It would be TERRIBLE! Sigh... well anyway, wonderful job!

~Silence

Haha,the Vizards won't die;they're too cool and bad ass to die. B-)

This chapter was at it and dont stop writing!

~iv

This s extremely good!Hiyori and Shinjii are mah favorite characters and I kno when they're OOC,and they weren't in these chapters!Bravo!

My favorite part is when they hold hands. :D The flow is amazing and the beggining of this chapter was creative and it lead me on.

Kudos!

~iv

Great chapter

ah, it's okay! This little chapter really made my day. :D

gave me WAFFs.. ;3

keep the faith! The vizards will be alright! :)

GREAT ONESHOTS I LOVE THEM! IT'S GREAT SEE A FELLOW SHINJIXHIYORI FAN! KEEP ON GOIN I LOVE IT!

i think he killed ALL of them T.T

so sad