Hey :) I know it's been ages since you last updated this and you'll probably never see this review. Anyway, I decided to leave it. I did a quick search on fics about ep. 17 and I stumbled on this one :p
I just want to tell you that you protrayed each character's feelings very well, no exception :) I loved it, especially Dante's part. Well done! :D Kisses*

please finish this is A-mazing and im a huntik superfan

Hi :)
First of all: You have a very nice writing style!
I really like the way how you portrayed the characters and centered their inner thoughts around one important scene.
All of the characters are very fitting, each in their own way. Not too exaggerated but just right.
Nice way to go to give each character one chapter.
A great idea to keep Zhalia with her diary - the reason why she write in it is very convincing.
Because it was not shown in the series I find Sophie's chapter very interesting and persuading due to the fact that she still remains with her opinion not to like Zhalia although she is able to forgive her.
Cherit's chapter thereby was very surprising but a really novel idea! Great that he didn't think the same way as the others - really refreshing!
With Klaus you describe that he cared on the one hand for Zhalia but on the other hand you portrayed his madness very well. Despite caring for her he doesn't hesitate to punish her or better: get rid of her in order to eliminate his enemies.
You also have shown the far-raching consequences of Zhalia's betrayal very well!

Hope to read something of you soon,
Yours Elvira

yaaay! great chapters! wish i could say the same for mine!

I was actually wondering if you would update sooner or later and then here you are! I like this story, I want to know how it's going on.

I'm looking foward the next season to... they said it had to begin in January but I'm not sure anymore... ah, I'm hopeless addicted to this cartoon :\

Love, Funnystar-/\-

I love this story so much! I'm...er, really not a big Zhalia fan, but I freaking love this story! (Especially the last chapter - "Seriously, who wrote this junk?" PRICELESS!) I love your writing style. Update soon please!

This is very good! D

haha, hope you'll update soon ;-D

Super ! I cant wait for next

mooi, het is echt een leuk verhaal.

ik wil meer lezen!

when are you going to up date the story it really good and if you sit and read though dante's chap with the song playing it put a smile on your it is good.

Hahaa, Mr. Lonely...lol poor Dante

haha, love the whole song mocking him. LOL! I love Dante and Zhalia and u've done a really gud job with their thoughts and everything. Love this story! Hope to read more! please don't end it.

-Phoenix

I think Cherit sould be for the next chapter? Please update again soon & thank you.

I like. I was hoping that I'd get to see your thoughts on Dante's feelings, but this is cool too. Keep up the good work.