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Guest2 chapter 11 . 5/9/2019 BRAVO! Best chapter ever on action. Your writing is seamless and superb. Much LOVE! |
angelsmystique chapter 12 . 3/29/2019 I think I've reread this story three times since I initially read it in December 2018. I really really really wish that there was another chapter to this. I want to see what happens...desperately want to see what happens. Hopefully these messages find you well, and I hope theres another Chapter or two in you. |
Angel Ran chapter 12 . 12/26/2018 Just re-read this story, and it was wonderful and I'm so happy that Duo and Heero have reconciled after their rough patch! Poor Duo finally showed some vulnerability with Heero, and loved how worried Heero was for him too. Adorable I hope that someday you may still add more to this story, and know that there will always be people out there waiting to read more from you! You're writing's terrific so hope to see future chapters one day! And, thank you very much for posting this story. |
ryokoyuy chapter 1 . 6/21/2018 I just stumbled across this story and read it all in one sitting. It's amazing! I'm totally addicted |
Guest2 chapter 12 . 2/3/2018 Your story telling and writing style are AMAZING! Thank you so much bringing closure to this segment for you the author, for us the reader, and for the characters. You wrote them with much depth and compassion as they struggle to define themselves in a challenging world. I’m really surprised there aren’t more reviews because this was just so good! KUDOS! |
StarLight Pixie chapter 12 . 9/26/2014 Hi again Gloria, It's been almost 5 years, but I haven't given up yet! Just reread Prerequisite for the third or fourth time, because I'm just so in love with this story. I know I've reviewed before, but it's been a few years since I checked in, and reading it again now still blows me away-your characterizations are some of the most believable evolutions of the GW cast I've ever seen. The depth and rawness of your writing. And the incredible realness of your details - you must do insane research to make those military intel briefings so realistic, cuz... you are very, very accurate. Hahahaha. ;P Impressive. I also love that you are able to convey Heero's dedication to Relena without making it a romantic connection... that's how it's always been in my headcanon, but I've rarely found a fic that captures this distinction so well. Even without the 1x2x1 bias, I could never personally see a long-term romantic relationship between Heero and Relena lasting, because it just doesn't seem like they have enough in common to relate to each other... but this type of relationship between them is exactly what seems realistic. The Wendy to their Lost Boys, how perfect. Even if this never gets finished, at least it feels like the end of an arc, so we're not totally hanging... although there are definitely some things that I'll always wonder about (Quatre and Trowa, Duo's new project and Major's fascination with him, Duo and Heero coming to terms with what happened on the roof and their potential roles in "the new OZ", Chris's mysterious way of knowing things, and whether she'll be a force for good or evil in the future, what happens when people find out Quatre blew the colony, etc. Will Wufei keep his promise? Will Heero and Duo ever see that island?). But at least I can get the warm fuzzies from rereading it to a point where they are together, and somewhat stabilized, relatively speaking... and thank goodness, because I was so emotionally invested in this piece that I'm glad the last update was less of a cliffhanger than previous ones. I hope you're too busy writing your own works and publishing them and being wildly successful at it, because your writing is amazing. This remains one of my favorite pieces of fanfiction. Cheers! SLP |
Bcheese chapter 12 . 7/5/2012 F-ing Love it! Also the quote at the end here is very nice touch :) Update soon ! |
Bcheese chapter 11 . 7/5/2012 Intense yo! Update Update Update! |
skywright chapter 5 . 6/28/2012 I love this story, don't know why. |
zeli chapter 12 . 5/26/2012 I read this story back in 2009, 2010, and again in 2012. I really hope all is well with you and I know it might be a stretch to hope you continue it at this point, but I wanted to say I greatly admire this fanfic and all the work you have put into it so far. |
ShadoweGoddess chapter 12 . 3/17/2012 More chapters than I remember, but I love it. Rereading it... I fell in love all over again. I hope to see you coming back and finishing this again sometime soon... I will PM you if need be and bug you! |
Nyxied chapter 12 . 2/7/2012 This is a very compelling piece of fiction and I thought I would let you know that you conveyed the boys' feelings so effectively, it tugged at my heartstrings and made my breath hitch. I'm interested to see what comes next. But even if you never update again, just know that I really enjoyed it. Thanks for that. |
L'Arc-En-Ciel chapter 12 . 1/12/2012 In your profile you said to help you pester two authors, does that mean we can pester you too? :) |
Me voy chapter 12 . 10/7/2011 You really need to know, I am in love with your writing, your story and well… all as a whole. The plot… There’s a quality to the way you narrate, how you can make it bitter and so good. I am almost breathless for that- You know, I saw GW very long time ago, I was a little brat –that frankly didnt know a thing about Yaoi, so yeah, I was all Heero/Relena- now I know better. However, I hadn’t really found a story about Heero/Duo that made it believable. I really didn’t got the heart between what would make them real as a paring –hypothetically speaking- And now my friend, you have made it. Relena and Heero –is there somehow, you just didn’t go all, oh, no, she didn’t exist… and that made it even bitterer. I loved every part. And knowing where each character is standing… And of top of that you made them so IC. And that’s a plus, Duo is not as weak as he is portrayed in some stories, you took that in account. Ash, lovely ash… The name of the dog is so fitting –let alone, they have a dog. Wufei, I sometimes wanted to punch him –Duo did it for me however- but you know, I could see his reasons too. Why was he doing it. It made sense. Quatre and Trowa so fucked up. Poor things. I would have like to know what happened to them on second note. But aside from that is one of the best stories I have read out there, it really is. Congratulations on that. About the ending for the tempo of the story –I don’t think is going to be a happy one? That if you someday end it. But if not, I am very happy to have at least managed to read what was published. It was worth it, very much. |
Gia chapter 12 . 10/2/2011 I looove this story...I love the way you write Duo as a mature man and not a little pasty boy...please, please continue...:) |