This chapter was actually a little creepy. *shudders* It was well written and I'm fairly sure I'm shaking a little; I definitely have chills. Mai and Varon bonding? YES! I am always up for good relationship development like that! (And ship feels in general) Seeing Raphael and Alistair further introduced was awesome! Even if it wasn't really them, the business that the Kaiba Mansion 'isn't right' is incredible. Noa being introduced was also really cool and I loved every bit of it (even if it was a little creepy, I curse being squeamish)!
Um, one issues though, you wrote this: "Varon currently held a long bit of a wood that resembled a bat, and she had a" it doesn't actually say what Mai has so I'm just a bit confused seeing as it cuts off...
Everything else apart from that one little thing was terrific though! Thank you for updating!

This is an interesting spin on Bakura from the past and again, I love how you wrote all the characters and Seth is shining out as a favourite in this chapter! Everything is nicely cleared out and easily understandable. I like Sakhmet being awesome, I like her/don't like her but she is really awesome and during those moments I like her a lot.
This was a great chapter and I can't wait until your next update!

Interesting chapter, I'm pleased that Rafael and Amelda have come in so soon, but I'm worried about Hirutani's return... Poor Katsuye... I'm curious to see who the 'third target' is, though it looks like it's going to be Hinagata at this point... I'm headed to read the next chapter now and fingers crossed I'll find out soon.

I love the rewrite of this story already! Everything so far with Yami/Atem is clear and easy to read and I love the way you write Seth! Going to read the next chapter now~

Please don't let this fic die! This whole series of stories has been so awesome to read and if you're just giving up now, when Seto and Katsuye can get together, it's horrible!
If you finish this story you would be making me the happiest YuGiOh fan in the entire universe!
Please please please please please please please please please, don't let it end before puppyshipping happens!

I have loved reading this series of fanfics, but I really need some new material to read. These are some of my favourite fanfictions and it hurts to see that it's all ended on a cliffhanger. I don't know if you merely stopped posting stories and have given up, or if you've just been taking a really long break. Either way, I feel that I'd have to start to beg you for more chapters on this, because while they are dramatic and captivating for a while, they are mostly annoying because they mark that things aren't going anywhere.
Sorry that I've been rambling, but I really do love this story. Please don't give up on it!

Cool story! But it looks like it's been a while since it was updated. ( I'm hoping that doesn't mean the story is abandoned. This seems very interesting and I hope you update soon.

I was pre-occupied with Senior stuff, anyway. Woo, high school ending in a month~

Glad you're still alive. C:

Nice chappie.

Hrmm... well, isn't that a lovely situation our boys have gotten themselves into?

It's nice to see you writing again. I really hope you're able to finish this story, so therefore, I hope the inspiration bug bites you.

Whoot! I just read all of your Dragontamers fics, and I have to say, they are very interesting. I just hope your muse gives you plenty more fodder for writing, because I am greatly entertained by this series of yours.

It's okay, college is tough. :C I'm sure you have more important matters to attend to.

Nice to know you're still updating, though.

Please update this soon I'll love you forever if you do! (As a friend)

I chuckled at Yami and Kaiba's attempt at small talk. It's obviously very awkward...

I'm still liking Layla.

I had read the other Dragontamer stories and so far I'm really liking this one! Please update this as soon as you can I enjoy reading it! -

Hahaha, I had also thought about how Jou and Kaiba actually met when they were still kids... similar to your version. XD

Damn, love the references to the female heroes. and more magic stuff, yay.

I admit, I never watched the Dartz season...so no idea if I'll get lost.