well, he was "senior Death Eater" and it went good...when will we see some rooomantic Bellamort? :D Or do we have to wait until after-Azkaban? :)

Oh I liked this so far.

CCCCCHHHHHHHAAAANNNNN ! JAJAJA

this story is so good!, can't wait to see how you carry it on.

and Dolohov is just right _

Ah! Dolohov! Cool!

Flattering...

I love it...the action...

Knife!

Yay!

First kills...pretty nice!

Reporting...of course she'll want to do it!

Grin and drinking! Wow!

After-kill shock is not for Bella Black... (loving her hard)

I loved the adjectives! Especially pretty! Yay!

To manipulate a girl with a huge crush...

(sighs)

Hm.

When is next update?

(smiles sweetly)

But I understand that you had exams and you now have school.

I'm with you in mind!

Especially if you update now!

Btw, I'll read your other fics now. See you son!

Bye

So Rod will be in the Dark Lord's ranks soon, very soon...God...

Glaring...

Too bad...

Pale Rod...indeed.

Of course...no emotions getting in the way...

Well, at least Bella's careful with that...

Though she has no reason to look better than Rod... She fell for the Dark Lord, for crying out loud...

Red red red

Indeed it would be cool for her, if he were in Rod's place, lol.

A few shades of red lol

Dolohov? That's cool!

A raid!

(looking forward to read that)

(smiling hugely)

(cheeks be damned)

A dream...

If he finds out that she dreams about him...that way...

I love the high-pitched voice thing

So Cissy and Dromeda go back to Hogwarts?

Cool... Bella'll be alone to hear her mother's marriage thoughts now

Giggling LOL

And she returns Cissy's hug...that's cute

It was Rod indeed...

She's so flirtateous...

What a reaction to «I love you»...

Wow.

Well, no sex?

Too bad.

A kiss at least...

Ah... The Lestrange boys...

And another girl...

A nice party...

Poor Druella

So the plan was as simple as that...

I'm disappointed

At the same time, it's simple and effective. So it's okay...

Spitting steak LOL

Poor Bells... It must happen during a meal.

He takes her efforts into account...that's good...

She'll bring Rod to him? Or is it another?

I love the practice... It's nice...

Tutting and breathing lol.

Tutting, he can stop. Breathing on the other hand...xD

She admits her mistakes...indeed...

He calls her Bellatrix!

Cool!

I'll be waiting for Bella now.

Poor Bell...

Feelings, feelings... (croons)

(cries looking at the rain outside)

(shuts up)

Insecurity now...

Poor, poor Bella.

I love it...how you express her feelings.

So confused...

Library...

Wow...

I admire her willpower.

(glares at cheeks)

(realizes people can't glare at their own cheeks)

(goes searching for a mirror)

(decides that it fucking doesn't matter)

(goes on with fic)

(pauses to apologize for randomness and insanity)

(goes on)

M, Cissy...

(strangles Cissy)

(guilty)

(revives her)

(decides to stop interfering with story)

Help from Cissy...nice...

Who who who?

To the Dark Lord the dark Lord the Dark Lord...

You know, reading your fic is very bad for my cheeks.

They hate you now...

Too bad.

But I won't let two cheeks reign over my willpower... (ready to fight)

Oh well.

She doesn't know where to go...too bad.

Strange...why did he attack her? To see her defenses?

Okay...

Wow...closeness...

And he enjoys

A frightened rabbit

Lol... I like the end.

Bella smiling at breakfast! Omg!

Lol. Of course Cissy MUST think that...

And now she's pissed...xD

I like the Cygnus thing...

Andromeda's right indeed...

And Druella is thinking of marriage?

(sighs)

(sighs again)

(again)

(again)

(tired of sighing)

Oh, Druella Druella Druella...

She's obsessive.

Endearing shopkeeper... (cringes)

Impatience, impatience...

And Druella must have been pretty shaken by the reaction.

Two and a half weeks...

(more wide smile)

The uncle and the cousin, headed to Voldemort...

(smiles widely enough to hurt cheeks)

Malfoy Manor already?

Now she's more willing than him...that's so Bella...

I love the description, really. That's so well done.

I love her reaction to him, and the way she acts...

Alone with the Dark Lord...how delicious.

Stuttering lol

Poor Bells...she must feel...um...little.

Legilimency...of course.

She broke the curse...wow

WOW WOW WOW

Nursing...

Being trained by the Dark Lord... Though it's very canon, I smile like amd everytime I see it in a fic

Awesome. Awesome. And awesome.

Hey Caitlin! I've eventually reached your name in my list, yay!

I love the beginning, the description, it's very beautiful...

I love Bella's description, too...

Rosier...cool.

He was the one to show it to her?

I like that...

It's very nice.

Oh... Well, I hope He called her pretty because He really thinks she is not just because He knew it would get that sort of reaction. Somehow, that little scene after the mission tested her even more than the act of killing. I think the way you characterized Dolohov was fine. Because he said "most would be thrilled to not have to see the Dark Lord," though, there is a sense of resentment or maybe fear in him, I'd like to see you explain that just a little more. It doesn't come off as disloyalty exactly... just, something else. Bella might challenge him on that later. Just an idea. I'm glad she did so well with her first kill and it makes sense with her character to hesitate just slightly but feel no real remorse. More soon? Love.

I love it and it was a really good action scene. It makes a change to see that Bellatrix is killing using other than the cruciatius curse.

I like how you portrayed Antonin and how he was with Bellatrix.

Oh and the last bit. Voldy knows that Bella has a crush on him. I wanna know what is gonna happen now!

Great work and can't think what to put next. I am just too excited about next chapter.

Excellent work!

-Sarah x