| Reviews for The Heir of Las Noches |
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Beebo85 chapter 1 . 3/30/2019 This opening chapter had many mental alarm bells going off for hints of things to come I think, especially Shinsou's warning that went ignored. I loved how it pulled so many things in from all the previous stories, you really are amazing at connecting this 'verse and all of the stories togetherThe part when they are having their relaxing day with their foxes was so sweet. They really can be a romantic pair when they choose to. And the gifts they have chosen for each other will make them very happy I think. I can somewhat understand why Aizen would be hesitant to bring kids into things. Considering all the lengths he has gone to protect Gin, and how much Gin was hurt by some of those actions, he is trying to do the right thing. And then adding on the experience from Jac, which I am thinking was shared with him on purpose to prove a point or force Aizen into submission, he has every reason to be scared to lose another loved one. But I also understand Gin wanting kids, especially now that they have finally reached the most honest and trusting point in their relationship. Looking forward to reading the rest! |
SesshomaruFreak chapter 21 . 7/2/2018 Your numbers for the chaps are behind. I like that Ulqui was trying to help Orihime. *tilts head* Aizen and Ulqui had sex? When? Cause does that mean he cheated on Gin? Oh my goodness the lovely idiots lol ;) |
SesshomaruFreak chapter 20 . 7/2/2018 Wow really rooting for UlquiHime here! |
Shyila chapter 13 . 5/4/2018 After debating with myself for quite some time I decided to read Heir again, because I'm a rather huge fan of your other works and wanting to give Heir another chance, after I saw you are editing some of the older chapters. Even if it takes a lot of time I think it was smart idea to edit the chapters, I read Heir till chapter 40 and stopped reading it back then, there are quite some things that just don't make sense. I asked myself pretty early if I missed the amnesia part because Aizen didn't act like someone who is supposed to be in love with Gin. In your older chapters he was even rather cold towards Gin, even if it was just the two of them in a room. As someone who came from your other works to Heir this was confusing, their relationship didn't seem so strong like it was supposed to be and as far as I know Heir plays in the future. They didn't look like lovers to me, more like friends with benefits. And Aizen, who claimed Gin is his everything, falling for a girl like Gin is nothing compared to her? Him still keeping woman on the side for whatever reason, even if he swore to never hurt Gin like this after CWST? And Gin being cool with it was also hella strange and him wanting a kid from a woman and Aizen, what would bind Aizen and the woman forever? And let's not forget the fact that some children don't even look like their father, or just have some features like the nose or mouth. The kid could look completely like Orihime. For me it was like Gins only purpose was a reason for Aizen to bring Orihime in all this. I'm not gonna lie, I was disappointed how this was somehow all about Hime, I would understand if she would get more important after Aizen lost his memories, but this wasn't the case, at some point I checked if Heir was really related to the other works because while the others were mainly AiGin, Heir was about Aihime with some other pairings. And I missed Gins fangs, he usually had, it was like all those years they spend together, the growth their relationship got through don't exist in the Heir. I'm not a Aihime fan, so at some point I dropped this fanfic, but thanks to I Can't Be In There With You and seeing you editing Heir on Ao3 I decided to give it another try, in hopes thinks will make more sense now. I mean you would be also be confused as hell seeing Aizen falling completely unintelligible in love with Orihime before amnesia hits him, is she this interesting for Aizen that she takes Gins place? I don't know wolf, it really looked to me like Gin is the manipulative ass in this story, like he is the one trying to tear apart true love that lasted over a decade and not Orihime... |
JK Robertson chapter 54 . 4/24/2018 Awww He loves her. Why, I don’t know. But by my count Ulqui is the hero of this story so i hope he comes out victorious! |
JK Robertson chapter 53 . 4/24/2018 And there it is, an evil demon hollow. As I suspected;-) |
JK Robertson chapter 51 . 4/24/2018 Ughhh it’s so sad! Ulquiorra clearly loves her and is so kind to her. I’m so happy he’s made another appearance, although I wish it was under more favorable circumstances for him. He is the only person in this story with any moral compass, which is a shock in and of itself. |
JK Robertson chapter 50 . 4/24/2018 Shit indeed. I hope Aizen and Gin work things out soon. |
JK Robertson chapter 49 . 4/24/2018 Yesssss! I’m so excited to see what she discovers! Your Loli is spot on, this was a fabulous chapter |
JK Robertson chapter 48 . 4/24/2018 Well if Aizen doesn’t get his memory jogged with that passion I don’t know what will do it. |
JK Robertson chapter 47 . 4/23/2018 Get him, Gin! Lol, Gin finally gets a backbone and this chapter is really morally complicated and I’m ashamed of myself for being happy for Gin... |
JK Robertson chapter 46 . 4/23/2018 Lol! Of course her plan failed, Loli is an idiot. And Aizen doesn’t seem too resistant to Gin... is he going to remember? |
JK Robertson chapter 45 . 4/23/2018 It’s a good plan, Loli. I’m surprised and impressed. |
SesshomaruFreak chapter 19 . 4/19/2018 Omg I'm obsessing over UlquiHime right now! |
SesshomaruFreak chapter 18 . 4/19/2018 Ooooh Ulqui likes her! I'm hoping that if Aizen and Gin are together then UlquiHime will happen later |