| Reviews for Long, Tall, Texan |
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WhiskeyStraight chapter 9 . 6/10 I tried. I tried to bypass the vomitousness of Emmett & Bella's mutual masturbation, but adding sexual intimacies with Jake ruins everything. The numerous OCs smattered about doesn't help anything either. Bella doesn't deserve Jasper, not this bullshit Bella. |
WhiskeyStraight chapter 2 . 6/10 Squealing is rather immature, especially for grad-school. Are they 12? I must admit my hopes have plummeted. |
sohelpmegod chapter 42 . 2/28/2019 amazing! the ending was so sweet too, and i love the “miss bella”. |
supergirl superman chapter 42 . 2/26/2019 this was amazing i loved it |
sc4536 chapter 42 . 10/8/2018 Loved this! |
Kimyune chapter 42 . 9/19/2018 I just finish the French Translation by Cathy of this story, and I just wanted to say thank you. This fic is full of strong feelings, I've laught, cry, you made a sweet fanfiction, my english is awefull, but THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THESE LINES ! ️ |
Guest chapter 10 . 11/17/2017 Jasper is hiding his scars! that's what the "with the lights out" stuff was about. Ok, riddle me this: Bella is going to CHURCH tomorrow where Edward is playing, after spending the night in Jasper's bed. Is it just the fact that I'm Middle aged (I'll be 57 a week from tomorrow), that makes me raise my eyebrows at this. I mean have churches in this day and age changed their minds about what constitutes sin? |
jeoliverio chapter 42 . 3/15/2017 This is a great story with a little heart break in it. |
Guest chapter 42 . 11/15/2016 I have to say, I've read a lot of stories on FanFiction and I have to say that this is by far the best I've ever read! So ch a great and original plot! |
Manasseh chapter 21 . 8/7/2016 I am confused. In the last chapter you dropped a huge bomb. Tanya not only blames Jasper for Maria trying to kill him, but she still has a relationship with her? Did I miss something in prior chapters? Because that is a huge betrayal, not only to Jasper but to the family. You only touched on Ms Evie stating her and husband talked to Tanya and she will behave? And that Jasper realizes she holds a grudge against him instead of Maria... What? Will Tanya also become a pawn with kidnapping Bella by her unknown stalker? |
SAYAx13 chapter 8 . 1/4/2016 HHMM I THINK I HATE UR BELLA :/ MY JASPER WENT HOME AND TOOK CARE OF IT ALONE AND SHE DIDNT... |
B4bidden chapter 42 . 7/26/2015 Excellent story absolutely loved it |
ptl4ever419 chapter 42 . 2/17/2015 That was an amazing story. Superb work. |
mrs.jasperhale1015 chapter 13 . 10/22/2014 I love that you incorperatid old nik names from the real book (no afence ) |
MiccaF chapter 42 . 4/1/2014 Truly great story! Loved it :-) Perfect ending! Thank you for taking the time to write it. |