Ridiculous to keep giving evil 3rd, 4th chances. Just plain dumb.

But no surprise. Too many authors refuse to understand that evil must be
KILLED
DESTROYED

The Gedde are gone from this world as it should be
Really STUPID to try and preserve a place for evil

Lots of dumb in this story

you really need to cut down the seemingly endless needless details about clothes and food

Its a complete disservice to Sarah to ever have her think her run was a dream

Sigh plot devices frankly are very stupid - as is this one

Mistake #2
You should have researched Civil War New Orleans and Butler more thoroughly or you would not have so embarrassed yourself

and by the way a lot of the details about food, etc are frankly boring to most of your readers, I am willing to bet

I guess one should ask if you are having sarah as played by Jennifer
If so remember that Jennifer is 5 ft 7 inches tall
that is NOT short for a woman

Great story

Love this story. I will definitely be reading it again.

Er...you do realize that smoking hasn't been allowed in planes for decades (probably since the 70s maybe even 60s) right? I was born in the 80s and have never seen anyone smoke a cigarette on a commercial flight. And your descriptions of characters who are POCs seem really, really old school (I kept thinking holy s, you can't say that).

Lovely chapter, I love pair J/S they are so cute. My Sara wow

I love this story. I've read it quite a few times. Don't suppose you'd be thinking sequel?

I'm starting to feel kind've like a stalker...but I just can't stop reading your works! This one was definitely different but not at all in a bad way. Some of the descriptive scenes in the first few chapters seemed dull to me and I felt like they dragged on, but I'm pretty sure that's me and not your writing; I'm in the last weeks of pregnancy and it takes a lot to hold my attention. I've noticed it's taking me longer and longer to read through a fic these days but I can't stop! I felt slightly blasphemous reading the last few chapters...I was eating a peach as I read and I was halfway through with it before I realized that a certain character would probably be repulsed by my choice of snack! Anyway, great story!
~LadyKnight

The babe with the power. What power ? Boo foo. Who do? You do. Do what? Remind me if the babe.

TeeHee. As always I fa stalk your work cuz if rocks and I hope spell check is working right... Blame my small screen if this is illegible

Is there a sequel because there sooo should be

I had to dig my old French dictionary out to understand some of the French words scattered throughout this as it's been a long long time since I did any high school foreign languages but it wasn't a problem and I loved reading this. Squee and his need to ride gators and the whole hugging it out with the snake had me laughing my socks off. Another original story that was well written and kept me hooked from start to finish. Thanks so much. :D

New York University, where you say Sarah is going to school, is in downtown New York City. Then you say she and the other girls are going to a small upstate college. Which is it?