This couple has grown on me, and Im glad you wrote this. It's perfect!

I absolutely adore this. There needs to be more Envy and Winry fans out there!
I could go on and on about how much I love this, but I wont. Good job! (:

I like it. I haven't found very many Envy Winry stories yet, but I've become addicted to the pairing... I just have to say that Envy's kinda OOC, but it's hard to write this pairing with him being in character, isn't it? I've tried... ;; Also, i like the little universe you've set this in -with Envy being on the good side. It makes me want to know how it got that way... That's a story that should be written :)

Wow this is amazing please make more

confusing, yet cute!

-Ramona F.

Okay, let me be the first to say, THIS IS TOTALLY AWESOME! DO MORE!

At first I was wondering why are there tiny bits and pieces, but then I got it. In my opinion, you should rewrite the story, but give it more detail, so there's more to enjoy. Also, you did really well on keeping characters in character, like this stuff can really happen. Great work.

i am impressed by your writing and how you have detailed this so well!

it came to my attention that you have crafted envy's personality into a romantic development with winry.

good job!

i liked how the different short stories sort of showed glimpes of their life together, very good.

I absolutely adored this fic! You should have made this into a full story, not just a one-shot!

Every part of it were excellent. And what I really loved was how the characters were IC. Although, I thought that Ed accepting Envy to be with Winry was a bit too fast. I was thinking about some Ed and Envy fistfights or something like that. Still, the story was about Envy and Winry anyway so it didn't matter too much to me though.

Again, I really really loved the story. I hope you'll make a sequel... :)

beautiful fic :)

Beautiful. I loved every word... lovely!

*squee~* I love this pairing so much, and you wrote them wonderfully. I can't pick a set favorite, but I loved how you tied them all together at the end (and what an ending _ *loves happy endings*). Awesome job.

~Compy

Beautiful, awesome, I wish people could do Envy/Winry like you do.

Cute. I think the timing is all over the place, a couple of months is too quick to turn anyone from a homicidal maniac to a semblence of a human being, and too soon for anyone to remotely trust Envy. I think you probably should have put something about why/how Envy is working for the military now instead of Father, and how he got stuck in that jar. That said the characters seem to be acting true to themselves and the drabbles are very good. I kinda wish you'd looked into how Ed and Al had come round to this some more. Winry gets all the attention. I liked 'Honey', because Ed has a competitive streak a mile wide.

These stories are awesome.