why do all three of these jackass men not listen to Bella?

Edward is such a pompous ass, always trying to tell Bella what to do.

stupid Bella!

no wonder the wolves are so volatile, they're so terribly inbred.

does no one ever neck in that house? just barging into someones bedroom when they are alone together is just friggin RUDE!

jasper didn't tear his head off yet? what the hell happened to the God of War?

jacob is nuts if he thinks he can just waltz in and pick up where edweird left off.

So I read the author's note and skip the chapter so that I could come down here and put my review before I even read this chapter. I am truly enjoying your writing style. I love to read Bella and Jasper together. As a matter of fact I had already decided that I was going to look to see what else you've written when I finish this one. So if you are getting backlash or not feeling appreciated I want you to know that I am enjoying your story.

How many bloody times can one character say Jazz in a chapter? It's a deplorably ridiculous nickname as is, and overuse makes it that much worse.

bollocks to that. the god of war would have taken him down in a second

Laurent was going to kill Jasper? i don't believe the god of war was going to be killed by a coward like Laurent

mike has always lived in lala land as far as Bella is concerned.

Absolutely loved it. :3

Damn are you really not going to make a sequel to this? I was hoping to see vampire Bella with jasper. I hope you reconsider it pleaseee

leah is going to take a bite out of jacob for going behind her back to talk about bella's involvement in the fight.