This is the best thing I could possibly have found. I searched the fandom and came up with nothing; I chanced Knight/Kisshu and here you were, sitting and smiling with some killer, totally-uncalled-for smut.
I love you. Seriously.

Kraehenhexe

Do more please!

O_O

That. Was. Spectacular.

Seriously, for not knowing the fandom very well, I think you captured the idea perfectly. I wasn't really expecting a Blue Knight/Kisshu fic to turn out very well, especially since you claim to not know much about the show, but this went above and beyond my highest expectations.

And it wasn't just the plot development, either, if a lemon-based story can really be said to have a plot. You got all the names right (and spelling), and I only noticed one spelling/grammar mistake in the whole thing. (If you look at the beginning of the first chapter, you'll see that you spelled "Lettuce" as "Luttuce" once, in case you were wondering.) I have seen very few lemon-based fics with this quality.

:O *is amazed*

Keep Writing,

Roselle

Loved it :DD I'm such a yaoi fan and tokyo mew mew was my first anime as a kid so this is how I found the fanfiction XD...lol please continue!

Oh this was so adorably cute!

I love the pair of them and you had them perfectly!

Loved it loads!

Keep it up!

Shnizel :)

Awwww, any more?

nice story!

e-o...wow...intencse

Salt: My BlueKnight had sex with another man

Pepper:Salt calm down its just a storey, any way it was really good

I loved it! You captured their personalitys perfectly! A sequel may be in order!...please? .

awwww! that is soooooo cute! good job!

AWESOME I LOVE

umm...ok I got confused with the lustful part, but the rest was ok. it gets a 2 out of ten on my book. there where quite afew flaws.

Very well-written and well thought out. As I was reading this I was thinking: 'Kish/the Blue Knight? How is that going to work...oh. That's how.' I love the way you described the feelings of attration and almost-hatred between them, and the violence of their romance. Kish's philosophy for getting over the Blue Knight ASAP was particularly good. The way you created the relationship, with Kish as both the temptor and the submissive one, somehow remaining in control, was very good, as were a couple of subtle instances of humour ('His duty and devotion to Ichigo seemed to fly out the proverbial window whenever the alien was nearby.') I thought you kept Kish very in character, and overall thsi was a thoroughly believable and stylishly written fic. Well done also for writing the ONLY fic abotu these two characters on the site, M-rated or otherwise.

True

Oh I know it's finished, but could you make a sequal? Preety please! It's just so cute!

Even though this story kinda ruined the G-rating for Tokyo Mew Mew, this fic was TOTALLY awesome! Great job! _