That was a nice and cute story. The start drags its feet and the way Phineas started things could be improved. It was very creepy in my eyes. The way you finished that subplot was good though.

I would have liked it if you had expanded Ginny's interest in Al. That could have been awkward in an adorable way.

OMG I CAN'T READ WHILE STAYING CALM LOLOLOL

I'm glad everything finally worked out, very good. and this new story sounds intriging , must read...

Well its about time Hermione. And that was sweet of Luna to tell her that. Can't wait to read on xxx

Awwe gotta love Ron for trying to get his friends on good terms again. and I really hope Harry and Hermione sort it out. She needs to tell him whats going on.

oh no, what a mess, lots of emotions flowing around there.

Poor Hermione, what a nasty accident to have, oh I hope she gets the wig on in time.. xxx

Lol, that was a funny chapter, awwe i loved how Herm asked what Harry thought of Hermione, and he answered that he thought she was cute. I see love building xxxx

I like it, and i'm seeing a Harmione ship beginning here...BRILLIANT! Absolutely fantastic so far.

There are five guys in Harry's year in Gryffindor. Even if Harry's a bit on the slow side, he should've known them after six years, and should know that neither Longbottom, nor Thomas, nor Finnegan are named Specter (Harry himself and Ronald I leave out here). Hell, he shares a dormitory and a shower with them.

Oh, and Harry of all people calls Hermione "short". He who is tiny. (Malnutrition in their early years tends to do that to a person) And he calls her "quite light for a boy", scrawny waif that he's himself...

Harry calling Hermione "Herms", yeah, right.
And Hermione not exploding then, indeed.
And Ronald forgoing the chance to fill his stomach with sweets on Harry's account.

Even more seriously OOC than Hermione playing quidditch.

hermione and harry were PMSing a lot.

nice, I loved the ending, because I've been just craving a HHr story with Hermione being a quidditch player - and voila here is one :D Thank you :)

Hmm how could Hermione actually accept Phineas as a real boyfriend from the start? I mean he frigging blackmailed her... No matter how far he would get with her, that is RAPE... S Same shit as if he had used lovepotions... What annoys me the most is that you let Phineas walk away in the story unharmed after all he did, Harry should have beat the shit out of him, and he should have been exposed as the slime he was...

Mattias

Umm sorry but this story doesn't make any sense, unless Hermione has been memorycharmed... Harry and her kissing, that should give a pretty damn large clue, (like an elephant), as to why Harry is jealous... You don't kiss friends in that way, so it is quite obvious Harry wanted her as his girlfriend...

Mattias