oh are you continuing? im very curious what the favor will be :)

Great story! You've pegged the characters, yet still managed to add your own spin. I like. ) Kudos!

Just found this and it was great. Humor, angst and action all in one.

Really enjoyed this, laughed myself silly at Eliot's embarrassment over having to steal a purse to get arrested, then getting walloped by that old lady!

I love Eliot's reading of Sophie, the way you describe all her choices of how to behave are great. Also, I'm just a little bit non-platonicly in live with you for Hardison's B5 joke. Of course he knows his classics!

Yay! Though you never mentioned a time or place except LA, its clearly earlier team dynamics going on here and I do love it! There's so many layers going on with them all in the show, and you express that well here, while also have a solid, episode-length con-plot that gets properly wrapped up at the end. Great work!

Liked this.

This was fantastic. I wish I could remember which recs list I wandered in from because this is just the kind of fic I've been looking for: like watching an actual episode! Wow! Thanks for posting.

I just found this fic - LOVED every single second of it! Please remind me why this isn't an episode yet?

All right, it's official, I'm putting you on my favorite authors list. Because every story of yours I read is sheer genius. And someone needs to hire you to write for leverage because I really want to see this live. Great twist at the end!

Yeah, genius.

Also, I need to see inception so I can read your inception stories (did I get the name right? it's something like that. You've written a few stories for it..and so has almost every other good author I know, so I'm assuming the source material is at least thought-provoking, if not excellent)

Wow, what a great read. Was just like an episode too, with the flashbacks and that ending. Loved Hardison's, Sophies and Nates reactions to being captured and yeah, when it became the Parker & Eliot show there at the end...I was pretty much the happiest girl alive. Awesome awesome job. I always enjoy ur writing a lot, find myself filing away little things u do in hopes of improving my own writing. You had all the characters spot on, in dialogue, action and comraderie. Loved the conversation between Nate and Eliot with the tapping, loved that Eliot isnt allowed near Sophie's tea. Just loved this fic. Great stuff.

Pj

The whole thing is well done of course as always, but my favorite parts were Eliot's loved his tension and anger and fear about being in prison, being handcuffed. Also loved how 'accident prone' all the bad guys around him seem to be. Haha. Parker is hilarious and Hardisons complaints about Nate's scarf literally had me laughing out loud. Awesome job.

Pj

I just recently watched S1 of Leverage and decided to look for fics. This is really well-written, with an actual plot that's clever and consistent with the show. What impressed me even more, though, is how you got everyone's voices just right, both internal and external dialogue. And you had some gems of narrative and description. I look forward to reading more of your stuff. This was funny and sweet and a really good story.

Haha, eliot and Hardison in the alley literally had me laughing out loud. But the beginning with Sophie Nd that lady was really well done and i loved the descriptions of her face how shed gotten passed tears and confusion and found anger and liked it. That was awesome. Poor Eliot is on the inside now...makes me a little sad! Cant wait to read more!

Pj

Interesting start. Im already intrigued bcuz it looks to b so eliot centric. Im wondering why eluot is so adamant about not doing it. I mean, is it really cuz he doesnt wanna get hit on? Cuz he could probably take down n e one who looked him funny...im off 2 read more asap!

Pj