Reviews for Observance |
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![]() ![]() Please continue I love this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Update soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay update! I'm so glad the date went well! Hopefully RL will settle down soon and we can get more of this story. ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow, I was shocked and happy to see this update. Hope you update again soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() lovely, dearie...glad to see you back. not so much for lankyman, however. ;) WOOT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter, i'm so happy you updated! ps. Lanky man is scaring the fuck outta me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() welcome back, sweetie... I've missed you... it feels like I've been waiting forever for this update but it was worth it... loved it... such a simple but lovely date... romantic... sweet... so relaxing... only to have you end with a bit of tenson... evil lurking in the darkness... watching... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd almost forgotten about this delightful story! Glad to see the first date went well. I'd love to see Bella go to the opera and see/hear him play there! Can't wait to see more about the weird neighbors/murder mystery as well as B&E's relationship growing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was an excellent update. Their date was great. I loved that Edward hit it spot on. The dancing was the perfect touch I think. I really enjoyed it! Awesome work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! I can't wait until the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yippee! I was so excited about the new chapter. It was awesome and well worth the wait. I love this story so much - thank you for sharing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a lovely end-of-February surprise this update was! I'm glad you're still posting - I can't wait to see what happens with Lanky Man and the gang. I think someone already mentioned how Rear Window this story is, and I think that's pretty accurate. It shows not only in the story line but also in the way you've written this and the suspense you develop. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed their date. One suggestion I have is to give a quick recap of the story if there is a long-ish time from chapter to chapter. I had to go back and reread to remember 'Lanky man'. That said, I cannot wait to see what Bella cooks up for next time! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. What a great date! This was even better than I'd imagined it would be. It was so worth the wait to bring back all my love for this story. Their time together in the rooftop garden was so sweet. Edward is much more than a pretty face to have thought so carefully what would please her. She has no clue that he thinks she's popular and it's very endearing. I was so very happy to get the update today. I appreciate your work so much. You are an amazing talent. Thank you for sharing. :D love, k1p2 |