This is very cute and very funny

...eyebrows...

Heh - Poor - heehee - Sanji - haHAheeheeHAHAHAhoHAHA! I should probably feel sorry for the guy - he goes through a lot of crap in both the fanfiction and the canon story- but it's just too much fun to mock him. :D

Hahaha that was fuuny good job.

Sanji with no curly brow? What has the world come to? The apocolypse is here! Damn you Ace! ... BAHAHHAHAHAHHAHAH!

Yes misleading summary *slashes the author* LOL

Just joking, I enjoyed it and i really think ace would be trying to run instead of using his logia or another way, because it felt like a bit of playing though I'm sure Sanji was enraged, lmao!

LMAO

snaji's eyebrow GONE

wow i never expected lol great jop

I LOVE THAT LINE OFF MYTHBUSTERS! This is perfect fic, I loved it, hahaha! This was awesome and so IC, I loved it so much! Mythbusters rule!

Lol! I can totally see that happening. Not only was this funny, but your little authors notes always make me laugh too. You are such and enjoyable person.

LMAO! This is my second time reading this, it never gets old! tHe characters weren't oc, other than the fact that Ace hid behind Luffy, but that didn't really change his character.

*Bursts out laughing* I would kill to see that in the anime! I can just see tall buff Ace hiding behind his little skinny brother from the big bad cook. _ Poor Sanji. His eyebrow will never be the same.

haha that was an awesome pick-me-up after spending 6 hours writing a research paper. It made me laugh out loud, which a fanfiction hasn't been able to do for a while now. I was exspecting a AceXSanji (although I'm not really partial to the paring, so I liked how your story turned out much better)

the description was great, and I thought that it flowed very well. I especially like the middle, where Ace and Sanji were arguing: most people would have their characters go at least a little out of character at a scene like that, but I don't think that that was the case with you, so props for that.

well anyway, thanks for the good read :D

omg that was hilarious! best story about Ace coming onto the ship! :D

you nailed ace on the spot!

100/5 stars! 3

That was fun! Poor Sanji though. LOL