I really liked this! Loved how you delved into the inner workings of Slick's squad, and how the men were affected in the aftermath. Loved the integration of "Vode An," how the feeling of unity and cohesion that the clones are accustomed to was shattered after the traitor was revealed to be one of them.

Great job showing the characters of each of the men as well...you really captured this group of clones!

Fantastic one-shot!

If this is gus pov it should be in first person i me or we you have it in 3rd person he she or they

brilliant! i love the way you captured all of there individual personalities! i had a slightly different opinion on Gus before but i like yours so much more!

aw! so sweet!

A great story. Very good.

I really like this story. It's very bitter-sweet. Heavy on the bitter and light on the sweet. But, very well written. Good piece of writing!

Keeper-of-the-Cheese

Oh i wasn't aware that you had an account here! I read this tale on LJ in the Clone Wars comm I believe. And I have to say it was great being able to read it again. This was such an intense if not heartbreaking scene, one that I would have loved to have seen in the show...

Personally, I LOVED that episode with Slick, as it showed an often forgoten side of the war: the Clones themselves. You wrote in the spirit of the episode, and it could very well be the best tie-in I've ever read here on ! Excellent job! You made me empethize with the Slick's batch better then the show itself. :)