This definitely tugged my heartstrings. Each sentence was written with such care and seemed to imply much more than what readers can see. I loved it!

*is happy that Yami didn't go off into the afterlife*

AW!

This is a wondeful read, I love it. It is amazing how you can catch and express so much feeling and meaning using only a few words in each sentence.

You took their relationship smoothly from beginning to end. Instead of fifty scattered sentences; this actually had a story. In fact, I liked it so much, I'm going to fave it!

I loved it!

Oh I'm sorry, "for the off the cuff" comment, it was never meant to be taken personally, nor in any shape or form seriously,it was only used as a general "expression". Sorry to have offended you. I think your writing is "awesome". Even a "numb skull" like me can realize when something is not quite up to par. Thanks for what you were able to offer, and I for one, really do appreciate it. Even these little drabbales are quite good. Take care of that illness(and I am familiar with it) feel better and update as you can.

Me luff dis!

Amazing, simply amazing! You, my good lucidscreamer, are brilliant!

adding to favorites! I hope to read more of your fabulous work! *sniffs* Season 4 of YGO is so sad...

Hey, can you read my stories and review 'em? It would be AWESOME if you did!

cuz you're so so so COL!

This was your first Canon fic? Wow o_o even though it wasn't in the usual format, it was great! You are truly a great Puzzleshipping writer and have the talent to be able to stay true to their characters, but have a great story come out of it as well. Can't say it enough. Kudos to you!

Whee! you posted it!

Sweet, simple, and to the point. I love how you write so that us readers are getting a great insight into Yugi's and Yami's relationship, but you express it in a way that hints that our knowledge of the two can only barely skim the surface. It really is something admirable.

Still love it. :) Great job!

Cute! That is how things should of been!

Very nice. Each sentence is powerful in and of itself, and they make a wonderful... poem, almost.

I loved it. You did very well following the prompts and the storyline. Except for the changed ending which is how it should have ended.