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Absolutely loved this story. The characterization was captured spot on, I must say. Plot was unbelievable as well. Simply loved it. You're a master storyteller. I look forward to reading a continuation of this universe if you ever get around to it!

I loved your story and it was very descriptive. The storyline is good and I liked the whole ending with Sousuke and Triela. It was so funny with Tessa! Though isn't Ceberus the 3 headed dog of the underworld and the chimera the head of a lion, body of goat, and tail of snake? I was just wondering becuase that's my mascot. Anyway thank you!

This was super good. I'd never thought I'd find a good Gunslinger Girl fic, and a crossover to boot. Evryone was written so well. I love how well Sousuke got along with the SWA girls and men. I would love to see another crossover between these two groups if you ever have the whim to write it. Ta!

This is a very well written story.

Hm...

Interesting fic.

The writing is solid, and the pace and tone is very well done as well. Keep up the great work!

I enjoy reading this story very much, and will continue to do so, but...youre description of the vessel is wrong. You should reclassify it as a container ship or general cargo vessel, as housing the protagonists in the cargo hold of a tanker would almost certainly ensure that they would drown in a petroleum by-product, or be otherwise asphyxiated.

Henrietta AND Triela... Damn. Sousuke is truly the pimp of pimps.

Way to see this through to its conclusion. Wow! You managed to combine these two series very well, and keep character interactions real and IC.

Believe me, I really enjoy reading your story! You were right in every character from both FMP and Gunslinger girls and I have to say that was quite a challenge. I would never have though of a crossover between these two animes, but you did great. It was very pleasant to read.

Thanks a lot for your hard work!

~Tidoo

great stuff. been a long time since i have really had a chance to enjoy one of your fics.

i can honestly say its worth the wait though, and i hope to enjoy another one in the near future.

I love this story!

Posting this story only when its completed...Interesting idea, but your readers would love you for it. )

I really liked the characterization at the end.. Tessa's behavior was really cute )

I never read Gunslinger, so I'm not sure, but I thought the story plots was rather nicely integrated, something that Xovers tend to ignore, so thanks for this interesting story, and hope you'll continue more FMP fanfics!

while I enjoyed this story I do think this last chapter was a little bit of a letdown. Given the situation Sosuke shouldn't have gone running off without the arbelest, in fact he should have gone off directly to get it or been in it already.

Henrietta could have been injured by a reflected bullet rather than from kurtz being just that careless.

And you could have had a bit better reasoning for Sosuke to work to save eve's life. That part felt a bit hollow.

Aside from that I do like it and the plot, but the first two seemed like fairly major logical problems and the last just not quite right as far as characterization went. I hope you take this as the constructive criticism that its intended.

I like the story. Thanks for righting it.

Another success full story! :) Cute end.