Reviews for Dust
Gaby Black chapter 1 . 12/24/2018
Love your writing style! My favourite line in this is probably the one about the haircuts being the first victims of war, that was funny
Guest chapter 1 . 5/20/2017
"Not alone. Never that."
Guest chapter 1 . 4/23/2017
"He is the reason that Sirius believes, truly and horribly, that they are meant for more than war."

This is so powerful. So powerful.
holysnitch chapter 1 . 3/17/2017
Ahhh you are amazing! :-D
ordinarylittleme chapter 1 . 8/21/2015
This is so so so so so good and I can't say more. Wow.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
this was so beautiful, listened to 'sea within a sea' at the same time and it went perfectly
girlwith1oneeye chapter 1 . 5/1/2012
Alright, wo, this story is absolutely brilliant! Hats off!
TechNomaNcer28 chapter 1 . 2/19/2012
WOW!What a gorgeous fic!Loved the setting of this!The ideas,the emotions,that wanting to be young and careless!Beautifully done!And the lovvve,oh god I absolutely loved how they loved each other!Lol!
Kimmimaru chapter 1 . 2/8/2012
Omg...I am so faving this little beauty! Brilliant! Wonderful! Evocative! Thought provking and saucy! Love it! X

XKimmimaruX
TopKat chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
i think it's really impressive how there's so much love in this, but still you can feel the inevitability of their end. i liked this a lot, especially the last line.
Secrets-in-Desguise chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
YOU! AUTHOR OF THIS FIC.

YOU. ARE AMAZING.

I have been crawling my way through the mire of SHIT on this bloody website, looking for something even REMOTELY close to the glory that is this fic.

And that is all I have to say on the matter.
BeautifulNights chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
Mmm. I love the smell of eloquence in the morning.

"He is the reason that Sirius believes, truly and horribly, that they are meant for more than war."

"And Remus Lupin is, undeniably, the greatest thing to have ever happened to a delinquent, disinherited aristocrat, regardless of the terrifying feeling of futility that loving him evokes."

"The still, stagnant air clings to them, and they lock their bodies together in every possible way, and pray that the dust might encapsulate them too, like this, whole."
Dani4ever chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
this was very deep, I loved it! cheers,

Dani
LyssaLaughable chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
ohmygosh. This was ohsowonderful.

I love how it's so perfectly Sirius and Remus and just perfectly in character and 333

Fangirl out xD

LyssaLaughable xD
annie chapter 1 . 4/8/2010
good, but too much beginning. i think u wanted it to be drama, excitement, sex. u dragged out drama a bit. squeezed sex in at the end.
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