Reviews for On the Run
inkspire chapter 1 . 7/8/2012
I think I know wha you're going for, with this, despite your fears. I'm glad I'm not the only one who sees the potential between these two.
FroggerJane chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
OOH! Any chance you'll be adding more to this? I think it would be a great story if you did, 'cause now it's just a GREAT one-shot. :)

JAN3
asloversgo chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
I actually quite liked this. It was a taste, a glimpse. Temptation without gratification, like so many things. Very nicely written.
LegendDreamer chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Hardly horrible and pointless. Nicely written, if short, and an interesting twist. Good job.
gentlelove chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Hey, I am glad to know I was not the only one who thought Nick & Cassie had major chemistry in the movie (which I thought was pretty good, by the way). You wrote Nick/Cassie really well & your story is the best kind as you leave your readers wanting more :)

Thx for posting!
Night of Dreams chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
lUVED IT!

even tho it was short, it was still great )
kitten318 chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
read both of your push stories & really liked them... so plz write another! :) there just arent enough cassie/nick fics eventho they're so awesome together!
Kakashis-Girl1369 chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
I liked it very much _ I don't see why you thought it was pointless, could be the beginning of something very good... :)
shallowness chapter 1 . 12/7/2009
My main thought is that this is too short - it definitely left me wanting more, with Division after them ans if she's invaded his consciousness what about the other way around after all these years? Very punchy.
eli1774 chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
I enjoyed where you were going with this story. After a few years and no signs of the bitch that screwed him over of course he would develop feeling. I also like that he is conflicted by it. Just don't forget to add her point of view also. Is she feeling the same way or has she not noticed because she is always on the run.
demonika chapter 1 . 9/23/2009
yeah yeah... i know ive been reviewing your stories alot but what can i say?

cant be helped.

Nice VERY Nice...

P
kehkaa chapter 1 . 9/3/2009
I loved it.

You're amazing at writing stories surrounding these two.
thisaccountisdeadnomorestories chapter 1 . 7/24/2009
I liked it. A lot. I loved the way you wrote Nick's thoughts. It sounds like him. I just wish they got together in the fict. Haha. :]

x

Tempe
Daddys-little-gurl4ever chapter 1 . 7/22/2009
ARE U CRAZY? this was a GREAT STORY. The dream, Nick and Cassie chemistry, the gentleman not wanting to think of Cassie like that. Seriously, perfect. Can't wait to see more of these stories up. NICK & CASSIE 4ever lol.
Dahlia Faith Black chapter 1 . 7/15/2009
I like it.

You could continue it, if you wanted to.
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