Excellent!

This was so well done! And now, knowing what comes next, it fits in perfectly! Great job! Thank you so much!

Ah, I was impressed with the idea of them having to throw up the poison. Great idea, good job implementing it. Also good to read about them trying to make their way back to each other. Also loved the stitches part - about Bobby's, then about John's, and Sam's. Wonderful.

'tis good.

I hated this ep because it hurt so much. This helps. A lot. :)

*mentally replaces part of canon with this fic*

Wow...if they'd actually had this conversation, how much of what happened in the next few episodes could have been prevented? I always like to see them work together and resolving their issues rather than fuming in silent hurt and anger. Good job.

Very good, lovely, yes, much needed discussion between these two guys. You handled it really well. Loved the back and forth between them. The conversation flowed very smoothly and naturally.

This is brilliant.

Awesome. Just wish the show had given us that when the episode aired as they sure needed talk about things. Totally believable and in character, and you were so inside their heads when you wrote this.

Yeah, yeah...this one made me cry, too - just a little! Don't know why I was resisting the tag/missing scene stuff ... It's great getting a little closure on some of these really scenes that ended to abruptly.

I applaud your dialogue in this story - it was spot on! I could actually hear the boys saying these things to each other - it could literally have come from an episode, so WELL DONE. It was heartbreaking in the sense that they still weren't completely reconciled (and we know where this ultimately ends up), but you still brought enough openness and forgiveness in there to soothe over the ache. Very good writing;-)

OMG, how I wish we could have seen just this scene at the end of the episode! I was really disappointed that the fallout from the brothers' fight wasn't dealt with properly on the show. And I agree with you 100%, I too would have liked for the Winchesters to work through their differences and become a real team again. But Kripke had other plans, even upping the ante at the end of S4, as we all know now.

So thanks for providing this sorely missed scene, and the as usual missing first (or in this case second) aid. The boys patching each other up is one of my favorite themes, which is one of the reasons I'm such a fan of your stories. THe other is the top notch writing, of course.

I just simply love it. This fic works perfectly and you've made such an atmosphere between the brothers that it's almost too real. I can see them in this, and hear them say the words you put in their mouths. This is what the fourth season would have needed. The part where Dean reminds Sam about the being brothers again -thing... there are no words to describe how much I longed for that kind of line when I was watching the season. In this fic, you captured the old characthers underneath, the caring brothers that melt my heart.

It's been long since I saw the episode, but I can still say that it would have needed something like this. Thank you for a great fic.

Well, that's sad they didn't have that kind of conversation in the series XDD

Pretty good job ~

Kisses and see ya D

Rosetta