Perfection.

Wow. This was very powerful and haunting. It really feels like being inside Sally's head. Easily one of the best fanfics I've ever read, even without an ending. Just phenomenal.

Rob Schrab finishes Scud MC Griffin finishes Glint.

Fuck YES that happens.

Still the classic I remember it to be. Brings back all kinds of memories.

It's extremely well-written. My only complaint is that the progression of events feels rushed, but I recall you saying something like that in regards to the entire story. Years later, the vocabulary still outshines mine.

I look forward to continuing.

Too many good ideas! Could've been the basis of like a dozen stories, but they wind up crowding each other.

I'm going to have to agree with the previous post: the story was excellent until it seemed like you were writing it whilst using hallucinogens. All of your themes were dumped around the first two chapters, but it was still an interesting read.

You're probably either dead or you gave up on the story, so I'm not going to ask you to put the final chapters up.

I think this story is odd enough to be totally engrossing. I liked the begining. Around the middle you start to drone. (I'm talking first chapter here). By the end I'm reading furiously, trying to get it over with as painlessly as possible. But the begining was stylish and funny and worth reading. What happened?

Hey, great story. I've only just read this one recently at Mistress Ali's website. Nevertheless, I hope you'll update this one someday. I'd like to see how it ends.

Your stories kick so much butt. I can't wait 'till you get the new chapters up.

ohhh this looks good

Well, The day is here! well thats not true, I am only on chapter 4, but still, so far it is quite good, and not just because of the lesbians.

Good story, bud. If it wasnt so late at night I would finish reading it, but I just discovered there are 10 chapters to read, so I am going to have to hold off for another night, but I will defninintly finish... or else... ummm... Im stupid.

Good stuff, so far.

OMG THIS IS SOOOO COOOOLLL I WANNA HAV YOUR BABIES!111! ;)

Anyway, sarcasm aside. The whole story is excellent, and seeing the update was very exciting. Favorite chapter of one of my favorite stories.

"This is rated TV-Y." You magnificent bastard.

It's looking great! I'm peeing myself waiting for more.

As usual another fine and interesting chapter. Keep it up. I'm looking forward to the next one!