Lol poor jak and could you put the link for the fan art with your A/N?

LOL! "At least they're not trying to kiss him any more!" I nearly died there! And every where else! This is hilarious!

oh god this story was pure and utter epic-ness. i mean heck i laughed so hard i had to put down my computer and leave my room so i could calm down before i passed out from laughing so hard! so thank you so much for writing this

The end actually left me laughing out loud. I can't think of anything else to say except this is def a fave. XD

ohmygod I've never laughed so hard in my life! you win at life P.A.W. 07! bust crack fic ever! XD

This is hilarious!

I absolutely LOVE it!

R.I.P. Jak's penis, taken for granted it's whole life. Well, since I'm kind of a "uber noober" (that's right, über is a REAL word) to Jak and Daxtar fandom, I can't really compare it to any other jak stories. Anywoots, for me, the idea is sure damn orignal. The kissing scene was just so random, I walked away from my computer for a while, and started to ponder in the corner "about the true meaning of life" after reading this. After that, walked back, kicked my brother in the nads, and continued reading. At the end where the KG's decided to use the "crotch assualt" manuver on jak each time they had their little meetings, I had to check to make sure I hadn't sniffed any mysterious powders. Once that was clear, I feel down and started laughing my fricking a$$ off, while rolling around in my own lake of piss. You defiently placed the "crack" in crackfic. Loved it, like to read more from you, going onto my rack of awesome-ness. (aka favorites)

Hahaha, wow. *wipes away tears of mirth* I haven't read any oneshots or stories that make me laugh this much. Great reactions from Dark Jak and Daxter. You desreve a magical muffin. *gives magical muffin and magical syrup* Yup, you got syrup too cuz it was that good. XD

XD this was awesome! poor jak though... :P

haha. poor jak.

RHP: LMAO! XD

“I … don’t think … I’ll … ever have … children.”

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! THAT MADE MY DAY! XD

Tin is my all-time favorite character now. Nobody would ever think about the awkward situatuions that could happen to the KGs! Ha! The part when Torn said, "You let a rookie go, didn't you?" Priceless! I bet two bucks the same thing happened to him. Except for the Dark side bit. Love it!

Your Obediant Friend,

Purple

Let me say, this is the first Jak fic to make me laugh out loud in a long time! Yay! I imagine Tin's method of escape might actually work that way- surprising Dark Jak long enough to let him escape.

The plot is original (as far as I know), so kudos for that. I really liked how you characterized Tin in the first few paragraphs. Likening the KG suit to a metallic prison was a great detail- of course, ironic in its own way, as the KG keep other people in prisons, they are themselves caged. That's an example of an in-world insight, and I just love those so much. Also funny was Daxter being the "brains of the operation," of course!

Overall your writing mechanics are pretty good but there are some spelling errors. You can probably catch most of them with a spell checker or if you read the fic out loud. Thanks for the laugh!

I loled. Good way to shock Dark Jak from killing you.

Stupid and funny. Keep writing.