Reviews for The Tortures of Love |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Lol sasuke sleep talks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Shh, I know what I'm doing." "How can you, you're a virgin." "Fanfics." "What? You know, fine whatever." And that's how Sasuke Uchiha lost his virginity. That's kinda an amazing ending. Is it weird that I've been thinking of going to a con and having sex with a cosplayer so I tell my grand children that I had sex/lost my virginity to a fictional character (like Gaara!) Because somepeople thought it was strange... I don't talk to them. |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL. I love the way you write. It made you seem like you have ADD xD. It was funny P |
![]() ![]() review of chapter one |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really liked your story and I can say it was a very interesting one. I liked how Sasuke is a bit changed but in the same time he is the same, and Naruto being as loud as always :)) but still him. I can say that is very funny at some points:)) I really laugh very hard at some parts and some parts were just cute, I couldn't stop reading until I reached the end of it and I waited to see the last chapter with very much enthusiasm but...I was kind of...disappointed. I don't want you to get the wrong idea about me...but your "Lemon" wasn't explicit at all...I didn't want xxx or things like that. don't get it wrong but it was just like a . when I wanted , Anyway it was a wonderful story and I can see that you are rewriting it and I hope to get what you wanted even if it was an wonderful story. I will read other stories of yours soon and I can wait to see how it's gonna be when you finish doing what you want. So thank you for this story and can't wait to read other stories of yours. Good luck. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story! |
![]() ![]() i soo love that the anime naruto watches at sasuke's house is like the generic brand of the actual naruto anime 'orochi' lmfao lovd it!1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh! I just found this. Tis very good :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice, do update soon! |
![]() ![]() O.o wow! i love the story so far! the only problem for me is the mood of the story. i'm not sure if you know what that means but its how i feel. anyways its real good. :) i cant wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story so far... keep on writing because i wont forgive you if you stop...Jk or am i :p |
![]() ![]() ![]() Completely loving the story, please keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() update ppliz |
![]() ![]() ![]() Definately better than the original. if u wanna add some angst tho, put in some deidarasasori and kill one of them :P nice story |