You ask me if I like it? I LOVE IT! One of the best fanfic ever. And the best thing is, it's completed! You know how annoying it can be to read a good story only to find out it has been abandoned later. Fortunately it didn't happen here. Love elfling! Harry. Love Aragorn and the fellowship. Love all the plot twist. And that PERFECT balance between love and tragedy. Oh, and last but not least, love that happy ending. Overall, a really lovely piece worth every second you spend.

OH MY GOODNESS! THIS IS SOO SWEET! Harry is just too loveable. He deserves so much love! I love him so much I want to cry

I'm sorry but I don't think that Harry deserves any of this. He just got out of a war where he was tortured, then accidentally killed every one else. And then, female super being offers him a new world, promises a loved childhood but transfers him in an elfling body close to the Fellowship. Se knew that Harry has a hero complex and yet, gives him a guise of choice and takes him to place where he will come across the Fellowship. Isn't that evil? She could've transferred him to a time before all of this so he could have a childhood with no shadows of war, then make a choice and be prepared if he ever want to join the Fellowship.

What’s the whole point. Of this story? Is there anything interesting other than Harry surprising the elves? They already knew so now that’s a moot point. I was hoping to avoid more cliche bullshit regarding literally everyone knowing about a certain world traveller but you decided to throw yourself in with the lot of people who really, and I mean REALLY don’t care for their readers. I’m giving up. I’m leaving fanfiction.

Tegalad is a shit name. I'm used to fanfic authors creating awful names, but Jesus that is such a bad name.

sniff...snIFF...WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!

If he’s to lose his magic then and you changed his original story, then I don’t understand why you wrote it about harry potter. You could’ve picked anyone and given him some random pet, like a dog or a wolf and given him elemental powers and it would’ve been no different than bringing harry potter and removing his magic, the most important part of him. I’m going to continue reading but it’s quite puzzling to be quite honest. It’s like Bond without his cool technologies or Batman but he does his job, John wick style instead of being stealthy and working from the shadows.

This was a fantastic story. Thank you for writing this.

My heart! Their relationship is so sweet! The ending made me really glad. Thanks for sharing this with us! It's a fantastic fic!

Why do you keep leaving the E off the end of Peregrine's name?

This was really sweet, made me teary.
Wonderful job!
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I like that you started your story at a different spot than most people! Very interesting and different.

Cracked and chard? You're already scaring me.

chard
[CHärd]
NOUN

a beet of a variety with broad white leaf stalks that may be prepared and eaten separately from the green parts of the leaf.

Thanks for writhing

This was such a beautifully amazing story!