OMG this story is amazing. I know it's been like, a decade but I really hope you continue this. 3

To the author: I don’t know if u will see this or not but I REALLY hope u finish this story someday. Seriously, I thoroughly enjoyed this :) It needs continuing, it’s a real hooker. Even though it’s been 10 years since this has been updated I hope this message shows up in an email or something, and I hope that u will get to read this. Best wishes for the future,
Lotte

I really hope you continue with this story, it's intriguing :P I think you capture the characters very well, and I like the idea of the Beldam trying to continue being a creepy mommy and giving Coraline advice throught the wall, it's a disturbing image :)

I'm hooked on this story. How did you come up with such a great idea? It should be a sequeal. I'v noticed you haven't updated in a while but hopfully this will change soon. I look foward to read many more chapters in the future.

Chilling.

This story is the creepiest fanfiction I have ever read on Coraline. I really pity Coraline. Giving birth to...ugh. *Shudders*

I do hope you update soon :)

Man, I really wish you would update this again. It's amazing!

Good story with a lot of mystery in it. The new creature I assuming is mother/father of Beblam and it is trying to make Coraline produce a better child. Sol far, it is very creative and make a yearning for more. I hope you update this story soon.

Whoa. Amazing story! You could stand shorter A\Ns, of course, but beyond that, this is one of the truly good fanfics I've read. Nice work! Keep it up!

Awsome and cool WRITE SOME MORE PLEASE DON'T STOP!

Love the story so far

probably the best one I'v read

update soon please D:

p.s. I think it'd be awesome

if the Beldam and Coraline

teamed up against that thing

but its your story write whatever

you like just giving out an idea

lol P

I still haven't seen the movie, but I'm enjoying your creativity immensely. I can remember the days of gym uniforms...ugh... Anyway, even if it was a transitional chapter, you provided a solid ending. Keep up the fantastic work.

-Jae-

u must be into this story i've never seen u update so quickly

There's a lot in this chapter that I love. I knew some of what you were planning from our myriad of phone conversations regarding this chapter, but seeing the events finally executed in written form, well, everything works. What more can I say? :)

10 points for the halogen light scene, you rolled a 20 on that one!

And so the adventures continue - glad to see Wybie getting more actively involved. Hopefully, we'll see more of Cat too - the feline's got style!

Keep-up the great job!

This is an excellent story so far. I can't wait to hear more about the "hospital". Correct me if I'm wrong, but Coraline and Wybie are 14 or 15 now (in this story) right? Is their going to be any WybiexCoraline in this story? I hope so because I saw a lot of chemistry (or potential for it) in these characters, and recently became obsessed with this couple. Update as soon as you can!

NoName :)