VERY well written. I'd have liked for you to go into his thoughts and emotions when he went to Spokane and was hunting for her, when he saw Eddie and Christian, then Mia. When he was running towards the house and it was quiet. The emotions he felt because he thought she might be dead.

Those could have shown a bit more in his memories of that moment. I think he was more scared than he'd ever been in his life.

Then when he got to the door and she was protecting Mason, that was a heart breaking moment in the story and he would have had strong emotions.

I miss hearing his full experience with the search and finding them but you did an excellent job with his point of view for the rest of it.

Awww

i am soooo glad you wrote this.

Idk who keeps telling u these r no good cuz their trippin! I loved this one 2! I love ur version of dimitri! Keep it up thank u!

Great job! Lookin forward to more!

this book was i elive just as good as the twilight series if not better

So cute. Dimitri is so protective of rose. :)

Loved it.

You know, I didn't realize it before, but those last two lines sound dirty. Or maybe it's just me... man, I'm getting addicted to this series/ shipping. Anyways, nicely done once again!

My favourite chapter if the book and you have captured it beautifully! Well done! xoxo

WOw, I love Dimitri...

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW THAT IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SWEEET

U R SOOOOOOO FUNNY U R AN AWSUM RITER PERSON THING THAT WAS

SICK ( THE GOOD WAY )

LOL

GREAT!

this is amazing! you should try to get something published! yours emotions and feelings of the characters are so great!

Ha..YAY!

You have no idea how many times I've read and re-read your VA oneshots. I probably couldn't even count them myself o.O Your stories convey so many real emotions that almost only pros can target. I'm surprised you haven't been published yet! I also love the fact that you actually -use- spelling and grammar check because, surprisingly, not many people do that...I mean, a minute of "click and edit" can earn you so much more reviews. You've probably heard this a billion times, but it really does seem like its written quite right out of the books. Also, I was wondering if you take requests? (I read your author's notes earlier on and you seemed to be "burned out" of ideas for Dimitri..) I know that a lot of fans and readers (especially me!) would love to read a piece from Blood Promise. I was thinking...I'd love to know what his thoughts were, maybe, during that scene when Rose "kills" Dimitri and he falls off the bridge. I love reading your stories! Keep up the good work! Maybe oneday, I'll gather up some courage to post my DPOV stories on FF.