I really really enjoyed ur story! It was really clean and i love how the character was in a way obsessed wit Riddick becuz im totally am. U wrote the best story eva...i wish it was longer but i cnt wait for the sequel. I'm soo excited and i jst cant hide it...ima bout 2 loose control and i think they mite like it hhhheeeeyyyeyeyeyey! LOL :D

Great story :3 I'm already reading the sequel

Ok, she has to end up with Riddick... What is he going to think when he wakes up and she's gone? Cna't wait to read the sequal!

What is merher?

"Serial killer hotline you name um we maim um"

that line is fricking awesome!

lol omg thats bad you made her lose her shoe! lol well at least it wasnt in a sewer.

Very awesome fic. I thought Angel wuz so funny throughout the whole thing.

Nice. Like the ending of Alice in Wonderland, sister and all.

Nice.

“Well bake my biscuits we crossed our tracks”

Names still needed capitalizing. Run on sentences needed to be, uh, slowed down, their way they’re way, possessives take the ‘s . . .

You picked up on my favorite bit: Riddick refusing to kill Jack. Dampened some of the fun, but still nice.

You’ve got some great bits. I loved ““Flying weasels!” ““Holy muffins”” “Oww stupid piece of pumpkin pie!”

It needed another edit – lots of names ended up without capitals; lots of run on sentences; lots of missing commas. But there’s a whole lot of fun.

Looking forward to a sequel!

I've been trying to get a Riddick poster...haha...love the ending

Its perfect! _

im just sad...its over...or is it? COR? idk... *is hopeful*

byebye ~yourmaster

mur-her hahahaha :P

yay for the slap! _

“Danger danger will Robinson!” OMG I LOVE LOST IN SPACE!

i love you! lolz. great chap...now im gonna read the next one! OMG!

Haha I love how you had her sing the song from the pacifier :-) hahahahahaha. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Spiffy new chapter! Does Angel have the same silver eyes as Riddick?