I really like your take on Kim! I hope someday you come back to this story.

I like it that Jared doesn't push her to speak.! I'm really sad that you didn't continue this piece. I love it!

Kim's reaction is true to the way you've described her character :) Love it.

Kim sounds like me a bit. I love the analysis of reading and entering another beings experience.

I think it's possible to love someone and pay little attention to them, but it's not a deep or a very true love.

I like your version of following Christ :) It sounds very practical to me.
It seems like Kim imprinted on Jared sort of, that's something that I like. The books do say that the pull is mutual and having Kim feel such a strong pull seems quite close to canon.

Sounds like a good story :)

Soooooo cute! Your writing style is amazing! Please keep on writing! Best fanfic yet!

Oh! The depth of my sadness cannot be conveyed when I realized this story had been lost beneath the sands of time...

Errr. Right. Anyway, I really love this story. Your writing style, subtlety, and use of Madeleine L'Engle is really fantastic. I hope all is well any maybe one day you'll come back to this story? I'd love to see more!

aw! plz write more!

I'm not sure why you stopped updating this story? I was really enjoying your work.

this is a great story, i love it!

please continue

please update soon!..i think it's funny how they have like this no talking relationship :)

this is so nice! can't wait for more!

This is very well written and you show thought and consideration towards your characters. I hope you continue on with this story