Wonderful fanfic filled with friendship. Can't say that I'm super upset that Harry died at the end of the film. The story was just following the comics.

I really liked how you portrayed the relationship between all characters. It showed the bits of romance between Peter and Mary Jane but allowed them to still be concerned about Harry and his physical condition. My favorite parts were the friendship moments between Peter and Harry. They needed to patch things up between each other after everything that happened. Also the part for Spidey and Hobgoblin was great. Nice reasoning behind the new name. And yay for adding Aunt May!

My only concerns were the run-on sentences and comma splices. Those run-on sentences made it difficult to read. And the comma splices were a minor distraction. You can either divide up the sentences with periods or semi-colons. Other sentences did need commas. Aside from the grammatical and mechanical errors, the story was strong enough on its own.

Your dialogue was also spot on. I felt like I could actually hear the actors. The ending certainly left me with a smile on my face.

Thanks for the great read!

Nice work. It was interesting to read.

You can expand on this

You're right, there aren't enough Harry Lives stories out there. I like the story, it's short and sweet.

your right, its about tome someone tried this

This is so much better than the original Spiderman 3 ending. I agree it was way to depressing but you took it and gave it life again.
Well Done! *applauds*

He lives! Love the story, more chapters please.

Good story. I never liked the ending of Spider-man 3. I would have liked to see Harry live to join Peter. I think it would have been cool.

Awsome first chap! An like you said there arent nearly enough of these fics so Update Soon! I'll be looking forward to future chaps

~Blue

Great story! I wish they hadn't killed off Harry... I thought he'd make a much cooler hero.