Thanks for the very good read

They did never explain it

Poignant insights. Thanks for writing it.

Well-written and in character. Good idea to write a prequel fic to the pilot. :-)

Great story ! It's nice to have an answer to the question i was wondering (why would Cho take the risk to make Lisbon angry in the first episod ?) Not sur to have understood the padlock thing though (English is not my native language).

Cute story. You just gotta love the guys - I'd have any one of them. They're just so awesome. Great job, I could see this happening in the show.

Very good. It felt just a bit chopped off at the end, but I still liked it. I don't understand the padlocks though...

Loved this. It's so rare to find a well written Mentalist fanfic, let alone one including some nice Jane whumping! Really enjoyed it, great job!

“Balls, she'll have our balls – how about that? Does that scare you into action?

That is the best line ever! Holy cow, that made me laugh. Great job.

Gotta love Cho and how he just understands things.

Thanks for writing.

That was made of awesome sauce XD Okay it's two in the morning cut me some slack on my lack of vocabulary.

I'm actually quite intrigued about strong bond between Cho and Jane. They never really did explain it on the show. Hopefully in the upcoming season we'll see more of the team's back story. In any case, this fic satisfies my curiosity quite nicely.

*grin*

Powerful. And well written. It's nice to see a little backs story.

Good background story into the characters. Thanks!

This is actually pretty good. Something I could almost see in an actual episode.

Keep up the good work.

Mary