hey!...this is really good! the begging was kind of slow to me, but once I got into the story, I really liked it! now I want to read more! :) keep it up

This is actually one of the better "Girl on the Island" fics. It's definitely the best one I've read so far! Please keep it up! I'm very interested to see where this is going.

great great great chapter!

I liked the way Talia and Jack seemed to get "closer" so to speak. They are soo cute together!

I can't wait to see what'll happen next :)

Please update soon! :D

Great story. I think you've done a great job describing everything. I'd like to know a little more about her past.. like how her parents died, but asides from that; great :)

I like Jack! He's described very well i think. And I can't help hopping that there'll be some sort of romance between him and Talia..

Anywho; great job, continue writing and update soon!

I like it. Nice start. Ironically, I had a fic about LOTF in mind and my main character was going to be a girl named Talia. You wouldn't mind if I posted it and kept her name the same, would you?

Update soon.

-anon goddess ;)

This is a really good story! Update soon! :]

lol this is a real good story so far

i like it