| Reviews for To Desire |
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Guest chapter 15 . 8/23/2018 Update please |
Nicoconsd chapter 15 . 4/30/2018 I'm so glad I found this and read even though it's not complete. It was adorable and fun to see a different side to how things might have turned out if Edward wasn't so... prudish? hehe But I would love to know how you planned on ending it. Does Bella become a Vampire? I am assuming yes but does everyone know she knows or how does that all transpire. Super curious how that all works out. Also you mentioned that Carlisle thought sperm was only good for one thing and not venom... that got me thinking does he mean babies? I am not a fan of babies in fic but curious if that was the route you had planned. Either way super fun read thanks for the adventure. :) |
Guest chapter 14 . 4/15/2018 I have a hard time believe Carlisle would take Tanya's side against his son's mate. |
Mechcat chapter 15 . 6/12/2017 Not sure if you intend to finish this, but I, for one, would be happy to read more chapters! Thanks for sharing this with us. |
jk chapter 11 . 3/17/2017 spitting on her hand was the "hottest" thing Edward had ever seen? REALLY? LOL...suuuuuuuurrrreeeee it was...I forgot that Edward is really mike newton in disguise. |
jk chapter 8 . 3/17/2017 I know bella "attracts" trouble in all the books but you have Edward say it in chapter 8 and it seems so fucking misplaced! Bella hasn't gotten in ANY trouble at that point...so having Edward say that...ya it was just wrong...and I guess I feel like Edward should be more mature...he is over 100 years old. He may be in a 17 year old body but his mind IS NOT 17 and wisdom really does come with age. So why the fuck is he acting like a stupid kid? |
jk chapter 10 . 12/12/2016 first off...I don't get the ben and angela thing cause well...NO ONE FUCKING CARES ABOUT THEM as for whoreward and tanwhore...ewww |
jk chapter 9 . 12/12/2016 why is alice freaking out? scared her IMMORTAL family is gonna be hurt? LOL and why in the fuck is she always meddling? I fucking hate alices character...shes a worthless piece of shit |
Guest chapter 15 . 12/4/2016 I love this, it is so good |
Guest chapter 2 . 11/6/2016 Bella got a little experience..just pls I want a virgin Bella and a virgin Edward...so they can deflower each other... |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/6/2016 I love it...love their first encounter...glad that they're found each other...hope that what Edward planing with Tanya would be ..canceled...ewwww...thinking of Tanya...already make me throw up... |
davysekhon chapter 10 . 7/26/2016 WOW this story is totally incredible. I really love reading this story and experience the way ExB are together in such a wonderful and different relationship. The plot is mindblowing and very good. I am actually reading this story for the umpteenth time and hoping that you will continue writing it. I truly wish you will update again and hopefully we all will get the chance to read it and enjoy the end of this wonderful journey as the story is finished. So please please please continue writing and I hope you know by now how much we appreciate and love reading your work which includes all the ExB stories you have written and still writing. I really love the way you write and bring ExB together into a relationship with each brilliant and mindblowing plot. So thank you and please continue with your brilliant work as a author |
lilcritter5150gmail.com chapter 1 . 5/6/2016 The best Edward ever! I love this story, so please do not scrap it, even if you take a long time to update/finish it will be worth it at least for me . I adore these characters, sexy proactive Edward, Bella with a bit of a personality, a nice Rosie and best of all -gone Alice. love love love Sexyward. |
connie chapter 15 . 11/21/2015 loved the story-let me know if you write more chapters. thanks, |
jk chapter 11 . 10/14/2015 the spitting in her hand was freaking gross... |