nice story!Always enjoy brother fluff ;)

Lemons is porn

Aww I forgot to do the 'I'll be fine' thing. Now I've already graduated! Dammit.

I keep coming back often just to re-read this chapter.

I'm gonna do this at school (Its perfect cuz I have a cold). I'll come back to put my friends reactions.

This is like my tenth time reading this story, and it has literally everything thing I could want in an outsiders fic. I wish you would update, but I have resigned to accepting the fact that you won't. Oh well.

With a kumquat?

This is really FREAKING CUTE

AWWWWWWWW SOOOOOOOO CUUUUUTE LOV IT PLEASE UPDATE IT !

How old is Pony in this?

I honestly did not love this story and I expected a much better plot. Sorry lol. Plus I mean it's not just you that does this, but a lot of other people too who write fanfics about the outsiders have Darry and Soda call Pony "baby" or "honey", which, if you want to your story to be realistic, isn't exactly correct.
But I liked how you had like barely any grammatical errors because a lot of other fanfic writers (including myself lol) do.
Best of writing,
Alex

I think taht is definitly and escusse and anything they should be made them for getting mad unless u were mad at ur self. THE BOOK WAS AWESOME YEHHHHEHEHEHE

Hi,
Although the outsiders can be interpreted in many different ways, I thought this was just too different from with an outsiders fanfiction should be like. For example, in the outsiders, Ponyboy was never treated like a baby, when they did treat him like a baby, he didn't like it. Soda and Darry never said "honey" or "baby". But, if you like it then I'm completely fine with it. Also, I liked the plot just I thought it was a little bit too predictable. Other than those notes, I thought this was a pretty good fanfiction.

Great story!

I love this story so much! I hope you will update soon! Pretty Please with a Cherry on top? Maybe Ponyboy gets really sick (Pnemonia, maybe) and different people take care of him? Please update soon!