I hope you have more to this. It is a very intriguing beginning. I want to know how they met and how Dawn dented the Impala.

I love Dawn/winchester fics - especially ones where Buffy may not like them very much for corupting her lil dawnie _ Please update _

The idea has potential, but if you want anyone to take it seriously you should remove the underlines, and make chapters *much* longer than 120 words. This is too short for even a prologue.