You are dumb and I hate you.

Really weird chapter.
doesn't look like tragedy, more like parodic and humor (misty following ash for a toothbrush).

Wow. This is pretty heartfelt for your style.
The 'kids' interactions seem real.
Though, knowing your way of writing, things are going to get ugly, fast, I bet. :)

wow, finally giovanni was over with the the trio rocket.
What happen to ash now?

Goddamn, I'm glad this story is back.

Lol, poor ash: pathetic among the pathetics and loser among the losers.
What is the main plot of the fic: showing how ash is a failure?

It's great to see this story come back. You've improved quite a bit.

I have not laughed so hard at a fic, a fave, an alert and free internets goes to you Corny. Brock's character in this awesomeness

Good second chapter! I'm kinda surprised you went back to this story, but whatever.

just amazing i love this... so... just so *out of word and awaiting update*

0.o it'sa... epic

Hm... Interesting. I don't know where it's leading but i'm curious. This is a parody right?

Dude, dude, dude. This is amazing. As of right now, this has the potential to become something amazing.

Brock's personality in this all. Hands down that this is what he should have been (should be?) like. Pikachu is cool, and Ash actually acts normal. Team Rocket are badasses. I'll wait to see Misty's personality - I can guess what she'll be like, considering your other works; if so, I'll love this even more.

Keep it up.

Uhh... lol?

You would do something like this. I want to see more soon.

Yay!