It's fab, congrats!

hahaha this is like what i imaginated that happended when Becky got the driving license ever since Clive asked if Luke was still going marry her after watching her drive!
; )

omg! poor clive! i'm sure he'll need therapy now. maybe he'll suffer from post traumatic shock; the kind people who have seen combat gets. he'll never be able to give driving lessons now. poor, poor man...

Rofl! Well *that'd* have taught Mr. I've-Seen-Every-Driving-Mishap-You-Can-Think-Of Clive a thing or two! ;) This is first-class writing - thanks for sharing! :)

I absolutely love it! You wrote in the same tone as written in the books, and that gave it a personal touch. I could imagine it as a back cover special! Great job!

i'm still laughing.

.Goodness!

I bow down to your talent really I do!

That was just so incredibly well written that it could practically have fitted very nicely into one of the books.

It matched Sophie's style spot on!

I could picture the whole scene in my head and it was utterly hilarious.

I loved the bit about her choice of footwear for the driving. It reminds me of that bit in Shopaholic Takes Manhattan/Shopaholic Abroad when Becky tells Luke she's had her brand new clementine sandals for ages and they are actually her 'driving shoes'Lol

Aww, I too would be mourning my broken shoe Bex ;)

And the ending was a cracker.

'So, do I pass?'

Does she pass?

Oh My God!

*collapses in a fit of hysterics once more*

Brava my dear! I am definitely adding this to my favourites and will definitely be re-reading it in the future when I need a bit of cheering up.

And it can keep me going until Sophie hopefully brings out a new Shopaholic novel.

Princess S

XxX

P.S I agree, it's such a lonely little section and more fics are definitely needed *hint hint*. The film was good, but NOTHING can ever top the books in my opinion.

Hahaha... good one! It's nice to know that there are people ( even if they're fictitious) who are worse than me. When I had to turn the car the first time I was driving, I accidently hit the accelerator, and just stopped the car from hitting a passing motorbike. God, it was bloody scary! :)

Haha!

When I read about Clive, her old driving instructor I was wondering about the story behind that!

And you deserve every single one of the reviews you got; great job recreating Becky! Very wonderfully written and 5 stars for originality as well staying true to the original series!

Loved it!

I thought it was pretty good. :) Though,the idea was a bit cliche to be quite honest, especially the last line. Also, there were some grammatical errors you might wanna look into. I'm no expert on that area either, but i find rereading eliminates most of these errors. Most importantly, Becky seemed a bit out of character. All that swearing for one thing and the way she called Clive, a "git". :P

All in all, your effort is commendable. and I'm glad you wrote this. Plus I absolutely agree with you; there should definitely be e-mails sent, to inform people about this category. XD

Oh my god, this was wonderful !I am seriously considering whether your sophie kinsella. Or maybe even becky, reaching us from the fictional world. Either way, I love it. really autentic

~ Death xxo

lol, I defintely enjoyed it, it was hilarious(in a good way)!

Especially the last line, it so got me :D

I thought it was okay. I love the humor and the obvious attempt in creating a Becky in your story. Though there were points that I did not feel her saying some of the lines. It just does not suit her. But all in all it was great! And I commend you for a good job. :) I have read and watched every Shopaholic Series and I must say, I know every character by the heart, if you do not mind me saying. God Bless :)

it's good. becky really sounded like how kinsella would have written. awesome )