I’ve always liked the concept of Grindlewald serving as a mentor to Harry. That portion of the story is very good.

The Count of Monte Cristo theme makes the rest of the story needlessly complicated, which is were it bogs down.

Regardless, good effort.

You wrote another fantastic story. I have no idea where it could go. Will Harry reveal himself to former friends? Will Voldie be destroyed? Will revenge be enough? Will Voldie find out that Harry and Grindelwald are missing?Will Harry be able to get a life? Does he still have Potter money in Gringotts? Would it be better for him to just make a new identity and stick with it?
I hope you come back to your writing someday soon. It flows well, and has characters that you bring life to. I really want more. :)

Why does Harry dislike Sirius? Does he blame everyone who didn't go to prison? I'm sure Sirius would have tried to find him.

I thought for sure Harry's new name would be Edmond Dantes!

I truly hope you update this at some point... for now it’s going onto my favourites.

Hmmm. Count of Monte Christo? I approve!

Ooh that is quite a twist! Good on Hermione! I really love it when authors have characters who react correctly to limited information.

It's a shame this seems to be abandoned. It was wonderfully novel.

I always thought that prisoner! Harry stories could do with touches of The Count of Monte Cristo. Kudos.

A very exciting story.

how can someone tell the day by watching the light in a building witout window... or the light he will see would be artificial that stupid and digging in a magical prison... or evem use magick in it

plz update this soon. if ur not planning to continue this story, plz let me (& your other readers) know. ty. sincerely, taka

hope you start writing again, I enjoyed this thoroughly.

This has been a delightful read! Is it weird that I'm getting the count of monte christo vibes from it? No matter, this has one heck of an interesting plot. Your take on Grindelwald is great too, I'm always here to see that schemey old dude!
Can't wait for an update :)

Wow! Most inmates would cut their own hand off for that luxury cell Harry is in.

Place a seasoned inmate who knows how to make *shanks* and he can find a way to bust out of Voldy's cell in no time flat or find a way to make a weapon out of something.

The security is far more lax then a medium or maximum institution that is a multi billion dollar industry that farms prisoners.

Slavery may have been declared illegal but is done in *other* forms including but not limited to prostitutes kidnapping girls and selling them overseas.

The US Government is *in* on it and is worse then Russia. We are the communist nation now on the wrong side of the Berlin wall.