FIND ZE COMPUTER ROOM!

(dies from lack of oxygen due to laughing ridicoulisly hard)

this story's awesome. i just felt i had to mention that.

This is pure genius.

It's about time someone stuck it to the sues and stues, and you pulled it off with humor and style.

Just one thing, if his name is 'Acid' then wouldn't he have green streaks insted of blue?

And I shall now put in my favorite parts from the story.

"Maria!” Acid cried out. LULZ

She had bigger breasts than Rouge. Her boobs were so huge that they covered half of her face, you couldn’t her mouth...that’s how big they were. Of course, that wasn’t disgusting, that was SEXY!

'Just like that chick from Dog the Bounty hunter!'

Seduction’s breast were not real, of course. She had plastic surgery at least twelve times.

'Also like that chick from Dog the Bounty Hunter!'

Except Pure’s hammer was better than Amy’s. It had spikes...and yeah.

'And...yeah, LOL.'

“Find the computer room! Find the computer room! Find the computer room!” Vector yelled out, numerous of times.

Dr. Koala twitched and shot himself in his head.

'Anyone else notice that the computer room didn't have any computers? Just a bunch of green walls.'

This story is made of win. And so are you. I luv you, and this hailarious fic.

You only left out all of the Cream and Cosmo clones out there. (For some reason, Cosmo clones tend to be purple. I don't get it.)

Another one bites the dust. And another five with it. The over all cheesiness of Gary Stus and Mary Sues is a common nuisance that we all will have to endure.

I had a Gary Stu years ago... What happened to him? He got thrown into a pool of battery acid full of vicious pihranas and electric eels. Shocking. :D One can do a far better job than make some two dimensional duplicate of a character. For goodness sake, give the character a detailed, vivid, and filled personality! Make the character alive!

I like the koala! I will keep an eye out for therapists doodling while they are having appointments. XD You know, I would enjoy that as a job...

~N.R.

Should I copypaste my review for "Who's gonna rock this place?"? Naw, this is different.

Ha! Take THAT you monstrous OCs! A perfect example of one of my 5-things-wrong-with-most-OCs. And my own holyness states that:

"Thou OCs shalt be smitten by thy sledge hammer and shalt be buried in a scraheap!"

Ok, come to think of it that might offend people, so I won't elaborate. Hope I don't get marked for abuse. Seriously, I respect everything.

But yeah, I spotted one OC in this story that ISN'T completely useless and pathetic!

*Everyone gasps in amazement*

That's right! The OC that ISN'T crap is...

*Insert dramatic music*

DOCTOR KOALA!

*cough* Ending review.

Laura:ACID YOU TRAITOR!*runs off crying*

LAURA! Oh well she'll be better 2mrw. Nice story grandma!

I love a happy ending. XD Acid's "tragic" past should win an award. There's nothing more tragic than having sand kicked in your face.

Perfect examples of Sue-dom. You win the internet for the day you got this review.

AHAHHAAH! ROFL! AAHAH!

War: O.O What the...

Luka: GRANDMA! *hugs you*

awh.

X3 poor OCs. And eww. Boobs that you can't even see her mounth? Now that's bigh right there. X3

(lol. flash back from the forum covo. hahah!)

PFT HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! XD Grandma! That was awesome!

Acid was so sexy. He's better then Shadow. ;)

Shadow: O_O NO ONE IS BETTER THEN ME! *attacks Acid*

Geez, they make me so hot. :D

Funny! XD

Nice job, even though you didn't copy ALL of the characters; there's no Cream, Big/Froggy, Espio, Charmy, Silver, Blaze, Tikal, Eggman, or Metal Sonic, among others. But you did a nice job with the ones you did use - this must be the only fic where someone would WANT to see what happens to the OCs! Great work!

XD

But... TEH O NOES! You forgot the copy of Doctor Robotnik who's actually capable of building something that can kill Sonic, and the Cream ripoff who's easily the cutest little thing ever to walk the face of the earth!

Oh and the Big ripoff that's won the nobel prize... _

Definitely enjoyable, this story!

Vector was genius, hun. 8]

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