Note to self, when time permits, PM author about wanting to adopt this story.

Awwww mannnnn! Boooooooooo

I like this chapter in general.

...I like this idea.

Great

The seal the pedo-snake put on him.

Rjdj

I like it
thanks

hmmmm i might just take this one up then, though im gonna make it a strict Female Naruto/Shino pairing if you don't mind. I got nothing against gays but i just cannot bring myself to write a boy on boy fic its not in my programming. If you have any contributions, old fic notes and the like you'd like me to use feel free to send them to me via my Google Doc. You can PM me for the email to send them to.

just a small thing that probably matter in the long run, but scratch cards don't work like that. Scratch cards are printed continuously and usually have one good one among six or seven duds. I can believe Tsunade being really unlucky and randomly picking duds but Naruto can't possibly win every single scratch cards. Picking the right card is luck but if you buy all of them you only have a 6 or 7 to one ratios of good cards to duds. It's more beleivable if you said Naruto bought the lottery or won cards or roulette. If you want to do cultural gambling, then japanese has a lot of pinball machines that once you hit a certain number of points, you can exchange points for prizes or cash. It be fairly easy for Naruto to be lucky and only get balls into the highest point slots.

Nice

This is cool.

don't mark stuff as complete if it's not complete damn it!

IF SOMEONE ADOPTS THIS STORY PLEASE LET US ALL KNOW. LIKE IT LOTS.

Hey,
I am kinda sad you don't have time any more because you were a favorite. But i also completely understand. The same thing happened to me a while ago.
I wish you good luck with whatever life throws at you.