I read the whole 12 chaps in one go...it was amazing...a gr8 experience rather...plz update sooon n make sure its a happy ending...

gosh it has been a long time since you last updated, but i hope you will continue this story. its amazing and your writings are awesome! kept me glued at my laptop for hours! haha really hope you will continue :(

I hope that they can rescue Chay soon. Will there be an eventual romance between Edmund and Chay. I would LOVE for that to happen. I love how you showed Edmund's love for wolves. It's fitting. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Is this the end? Do we ever get to read about them saving Chay and helping her get back to Charn? It's a great story, but it needs a little more of an ending. -Skyelark P.S. I love your It started with a WArdrobe vid. I have it in my favorites bar.

Totally awesom! I love it. I'd wish you'd write more stories of Narnia like this. I like the idea of Peter having a romance with someone like chay. Maybe you should write a story about something like that.

You might know me on Youtube as briecheezit, You'll notice I've been spamming your videos with love. Well, look! Now I'll spam you here. Brilliant, as usual, and I can't wait to read more! I adore Edmund.

Wow. This is amazing. I think even the quality of your writing itself is better when you write long fics. I can't wait to see where this goes! :)

I really haven't given you nearly the amount of reviews you deserve, but I've been reading this multiple chapters at a time, so... :)

Oh, and I clicked OTHER on your poll, so... what I think is that someone should bash it into Peter's head that he's being far MORE childish than his brother is concerning Faolchu. It would be a good idea for the functioning of their group, and, depending on how and when it was done, it could be very amusing!

I got it, really remember it... but now I've lost it. What was it again?

This was so good! Why has it been on hold for so long?

Oh, I'm SO enjoying this!

I know it's been a long time since it was updated, but PLEASE finish. It's wonderful.

PLEASE START THIS AGAIN! I LOVE IT

Soooooo... I really like this story! You haven't written in quite a while *cough cough* but if you do, you know you've got a reader! I wish I knew what happens next in this story! I mean... it's just too interesting! *sigh* Chay is a confusing character, because I don't know if she's trustworthy or not. I really like Jasper, and the little fights with Peter, Jasper, and Philip over Edmund... well, let's say I get a kick out of those! All of the flashbacks/memories/visions... they're making me a little worried about what's going to happen to Edmund in the future. It sounds like he's supposed to die. And what of Narnia? *groans* There was something else I wanted to say... but I can't remember it. Anyway, if you ever read this review, please write more or PM me for advice! I bet I could help figure some stuff out here...

Why have you stopped updating? This is such an awesome story! I'm really hoping this is just temporary neglect and not abandonment? Please... Pretty please? The term 'too good to quit' applies beautifully.

Cheers. Andi.

ooooohhh... this promises an epic masterpiece! Your writing's excellent! Vivid and almost like we're the ones having the dream. I could so clearly feel Edmund's desire to galop thorugh the dark forest and adrenalin pumping through my body. Very potent writing. Love it! Adding it to my favorites and hope that you keep writing.

Andi.

I wish that you would continue this story. I enjoy it and I love the video!