this made me choke up a bit. i actually havent read that far but i seen the spoilers, and thanks for handling this way better then the manga, the emotions are really raw in here.
(sorry for the short comment but all the love for this)

I've read all these little drabbles, but I wanted to revie on this one because it's without a doubt my favorite. Overall, in each of these short stories you've been telling you've perfectly captured not only the character's personalities, but the way they truly felt about the events you've chosen to write about. I really love these so much and I've read this specific story (Because Zoro and Sanji friendship for one) a good amount of times because I love how well written it was, even for it being short.

I'm really excited to see what else you have written once you've updated this! :)

While trying to figure out what tune this should be sung to, I ended up doing a thing: user/wite_c/media/West%20Blue%20Lullaby_ .html

Hope you don't mind. :)

Wow. You did an excellent job capturing the darkness of capturing the complex darkness of what's happening in something so simple. Well done.

I'm kinda wondering why Nami went with Usopp as her guard in this situation but it works.

This is pretty much the impression I imagine most men who when they meet Robin.

That was really sweet. I wanna cry.

I love this series! Its short and sweet, and it supports my two fav One Piece couples- UsoxNami and Frobin.

I loved seeing this more vulnerable side of Nami, and even if Usopp was silent the whole time, the interaction between Usopp and Nami here was wonderful.

Wow. I love all of these little ficlets, they're cute and insightful and well-written.

:( That was wonderful and sad at the same time.

Lovely introspective piece. I must admit that I do forget that Absalom sexually assaulted Nami - she must be a wreck inside, even if she took it in stride then.

I have added your story to my OP!challenge community, if that is ok.

Powerful stuff in this chapter. Loved how you portrayed Usopp as a silent guardian. Hope you write a follow up to this showing Usopp helping her get through her feelings of shame.

I love this chapter. It's amazing that you captured everything I love about hurt/comfort, with very little actual hurt/comfort or interaction -.

This is beautiful, probably my favorite, right up there with 'Underneath the Surface.'

Wow, this was a truly brilliant chapter. I really loved it! - It's so well written, keep it up!

~AHWH~

This is so beautiful!