Gosh, I didn't squeal, not at all. That was adorable! I loved it, great job!

All together, now:

Awwww!

So sweet! Very nicely done. :)

Phantom Jedi

OOOOHHHH

Hey,

This was a really great story. But I'm kind of confused-is this the end? I feel like there's one more chapter left, you know? Anyways, I hope you update really soon because I loved it :)

Hey, are you going to update this anytime soon? Because it's been a while and this is probably the best Star Wars story I've read yet.

Love it. Looking forward to more.

Read this over on and just wanted to say "Well done!" I rarely read about Jaina/Jag, so this was a nice surprise indeed. :)

Phantom Jedi

Wonderful absolutely wonderful. Though I must say ending Chapter Nine like that and having no other chapters damn near killed me. XD I love your writing style and your quirky dialogue, and your portrayals of Jaina and Jag are flawless. Please update soon, your talent as a writer is stunning and brilliant all rolled into one. Thanks for making my day, and I hope to see more!

Wow! What an amazing story. Your writing is supurb and the characters are completely believable. I really do think that if this were a novel they'd behave exactly the same way. Please update soon!

I love this story. Just had to tell you how much I've enjoyed it. You're right... this is exactly the type of thing I wish they would've given us after Invincible. Jaina & Jag deserve some happiness, and you're giving it to them (albeit slowly!)

I look forward to more updates!

This is a gorgeous story. You've fleshed out and really given life to the Fel family, so realistically and so in character - very impressive! I love watching the dynamics shifting between Jag, Jaina, Soontir and Syal - fascinating! The whole way through, I'm just waiting for Jag to pop the question as well :) Fantastic stuff, hope you keep writing!

This is an amazing story. I especially love how you've expanded upon the Fel family, all the characters are fleshed out and the family atmosphere you've created is wonderful! Great work :)

This is great. Love the portrayal of the Fels. Hope you add on soon.

Oh...cliffie...I really like this story though and I appreciate your potryal of the Fel family as actual people instead of robots. Please write more!

This is interesting, I've enjoyed reading it. I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)