When might you ever write a new story? I've got and idea.

i am just saying cyndaquil his blue not green

I have one word and one word only. sequel

Cool, being based off of the Mystery Dungeon series, as they're more plot heavy. I could picture this perfectly in my head.

Awh~ This probably the cutest, most fluffiest thing I've ever read! And I especially loved the ending ;)

xx

Natsumi~x

I love the ending it's so romanac!

Nice story. XD *Vineslaps Cel* But THATS for laughing at me.

I LUV IT! I probably know no one who will ever think of a pairing like that. This is in my favorites, no mind changin!

XD Near the end, I kept giggling, and I think that Ilan is awesome! I might steal him...heehee... *grins mischievously*

Anyways, I think Ashia really got her confidence boosted. *nudge nudge, wink wink* All joking aside, I like how you also brought Aden's weakness to water in this, and the climax was when Ashia was held in the Ariados' (Crap, I forgot her name) hold - was she using Psychic or something? That's kick-butt, man! I love Ariados! The tension in the story certainly rose as it became apparent that Aden's fire needed to be ignited. Excellent writing skills, Cel! *pats on back*

~DL (blahtoolazy!)

cool, sorry for short review, i have to go in a few min probably

Great story, Cel! I absolutely loved it, especially the way how Ashia eventually becomes more and more confident about herself as the story progresses.

Thanks a lot for writing this for my hatchday! XD