That. Was. Amazing! Your characterizations were spot on, the whump was perfect. I loved every minute of it. Now off I go to read everything else you've ever written.

Absolutely fantastic story. Every scene was described beautifully and I loved reading every word of it. Beautifully written.

That was very good. Rodney angst. Shep whump. Good stuff.

I can't believe that despite reading this several times, there's no review from me here! My bad! Maybe somewhere else?

Anyway, I love car crashes, jumper crashes, Shep whump, Shep being stoic, Shep being loked after, so hon, I can assure you that every time I read this, it's a big hit with me. Thanks!

I love this story. It is well paced with the right level of whump at regular intervals. I especially like the final scene before they make it to safety when McKay tells him to 'hold on'. Great stuff! Thank you for a lovely read.

I really like this story, great job. Thanks for sharing.

Great story.

*thumbs up*

One word: WOW!

That was awesome girl! I Loved the storyline, the premise, John wanting to help Rodney, the snark and the friendship.

*luffs John and Rodney*

Thanks for writing such a great story! :D

I really enjoyed reading this story. I especially liked the end.

Oh wow, this is excellent! Poor Rodney, blaming himself. And John, having to be sneaky and pushing him through the wormhole (!) - and then getting them lost in a blizzard!

"John disagreed. Vehemently. For 20 minutes. It was cold, they were lost, they had little food and no one was coming to look for them. They needed to get going and they needed to get going now.

“Sheppard, damn it, you can’t even stand.”

That was Rodney’s argument. John hadn’t found a way around it yet." - Love this bit!

"“The president wishes you a speedy recovery, by the way.”" - ROTFL! Oh, Rodney! LOL! Emailing the president? Priceless!

There were lots of other bits I loved too!

Great story!

Yes, this is a great story. I particularly enjoyed the first scene ('the V word' *lol*) and John's rephrasing of Rodney's accusation in the SGC quarters. *g*

I do still think Sheppard is a stupid idiot anytime he keeps serious injuries from his teammates, even Rodney - especially when the latter is the only one around. Trust is a two-way street after all, and if you can't trust your team leader to import vital information like oh, the itty-bitty fact that he was suffocating? Yeah, great teamwork there! (And if someone were to argue he didn't realize the severity, after all the injuries he's suffered during his career, than by God he's way too dumb to ever have passed any Mensa tests.)

But then, that idiocy was made canon long ago ...

You're really quite good at the characterization. You've got these guy's down pat. Great story!

Loved this! Give me some Shep whump and the boys in trouble, and I'm a happy (albeit sick, yes, I admit it) fangirl.

Thanks for a great read.