To tell you the truth, actually 'I'm having one of those moments where you actually can't stop smiling'. :)
Sweet, hilarious and cute.

Oh I loved all the previous pick up lines... But couldn't wait to review because each and every one was so hilarious in its own way and the quirky, witty replies of Lily were so brilliant that I couldn't wait to move on to the next one.

But I have to say this... James is so adorably dumb. 3

This was so sweet - honestly her and Alice's attempts at pickup lines and James' complete confusion had me giggling.

it's because he doesn't know what the pick up lines mean in the first plaaacceee ughhh Sirius was the one pulling all the strings

Oh dear, James is really clueless but adorable nevertheless!

HAHAHHAHAHAHA

Sooo... I wanna know what the extravagant act thing is! But alas, it has been 7 years (did you break a mirror or something)! Please update soon... You said in February of 2010 that you were almost done with the next chapter, where is it?

*snickers at the cluelessness of James*

*snickers* he doesn't even understand his own pick-up line!

Another great last line!

That last line is so funny!

Haha, loved it! Please finish it!

YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!

This is a rather humorous interpretation of how they got together. Though this was a good ending spot, I guess, COULD YOU PLEASE ADD THE NEXT CHAPTER?!

Actually, I did understand it! Here, I'll explain it for you...
So one hourbeauty
One week24 hrs x 7 days, so it's 168 hrs
So beauty is 1 hr. Apparently Lily is 168 x beauty, so she's REALLY beautiful and pretty.

Did I make that make more sense, or did I just confuse you more?
:) ;) ;P

Funny